I have meant to leave a review for this for the longest time, but I haven't gotten around to it until now. Whoops. But anyway, I really loved this one-shot, and the story that came before this. Louis was just so interesting to read about, and I'm really glad he got his happy ending ~ he deserved it.
Percy and Audrey making him do a proper business presentation and wanting shares in his firework business made me laugh ~ it just seemed so Percy.
Anyway, I really enjoyed it :D
Ellie :) xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked my stor(ies). And thanks for reviewing! ^_^ --Jenna Report Review
Yay i love that louis got his happy ending. 10/10 : )Author's Response: Thank you again! I'm glad that you enjoyed his story(ies). ^_^ --Jenna Report Review
Awww, finally! Louis deserved his happy ending, in all aspects. It was nice to see him grow up yet still be himself in every way. Your prose matches those changes, but keep to the fun and egotistical quirks that are very Louis. Amelia/Molly was a funny side pairing, and I'm all for it haha!
Ah! I'm glad Louis grew up and came into his own in every way. And Benjamin that sneaky, sly dog. I'm glad he came to his senses! I wish there was a bit more detail about the divorce and more in general with their future and more lovey-dovey sappy stuff of that nature. Very solid writing, you did a lovely job Jenna! I hope Foolproof gets updated next ;)
--EllieAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed this. ^_^
That's one of the hardships of a first person story, can't really get into the other bloke's head. :( It's safe to say that one could guess what happened with Benjamin's marriage considering he was gay. And married a woman. Who he didn't care for much to begin with. Lol.
Foolproof is next. And it was actually this review that gave me the spark I needed to get cracking on the next chapter. So double thank yous!! --Jenna Report Review
That was really good! Only thing I would say, is that we don't really get to find out much about what happened between Benji and his ex wife. Other than that it was amazing! :DAuthor's Response: Hehehe well the story is in Louis' POV is why. ^_^
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! --Jenna Report Review
I read this this morning, just before college, so I'm reviewing now.
Louis got his happily ever after! I'm just so excited! Louis + Benji = love! I keep going back and reading the end because I just got so... happy when I read it. :D
This was amazing, Jenna!
Sam.Author's Response: Aww thank you so much!! ^_^ --Jenna Report Review
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