Aw that's so cute I loved the proposAl and its all really sweet

Author's Response: Thanks, em!

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Hi - even though I am a HUGE fan I do think that you should have let dom keep the baby and also she would have realised because of blood (my older sister had one) so...but overall good :)
Em

Author's Response: Yeah, that was kind of mean. I'm sorry about your sister, and I'm sorry about my mess-up. Thanks, again!

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I can't say how much I

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Hi just wondering where your from america/australia/canada???
Loving EVERYTHING
I love all the characters
Em xx

Author's Response: I'm from America. California! Thanks again, you are way to sweet Em.

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Hi
I definatley agree with you about aspens room, definatley my favourite part also just so you know I'm english so if you need any advice about it all let me know. This has got to be one of my fave stories I've ever read and I've been reading them for over a year!
I LOVE it all :)
Em xx

Author's Response: AH! Thank you SOOO much!

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I love this story and have a link with cancer through family, I don't find it offensive at all. Your an AMAZING writer! I love the story line also if you can please read my story, I'm Magic Hallow and its called Living life as it comes thanks
Em xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much Em! That means a lot. Sure, I'll check it out!

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I meant to review this when the last chapter was posted but honestly I just couldn't bring myself to do it.

I loved that you kept me on my toes the entire story. I never really knew what to expect from the next chapter. You did such a phenomenal job with this story.

The end was just so heartbreaking. They were meant to be together and in love, yet they were separated at such a young age. Completely and absolutely heartbreaking, but that didn't stop me from loving it any less. Thank you for sharing you're art with all of us readers.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!!!

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This story was golden. I feel in love with the story. I stayed up late reding and read straight threw some of my favorite classes! It was great I was sitting in my local Starbucks and yelled out "NO NOT JAMES! They were were going to live happily ever after!" attracting many weired looks and concerned glairs from strangers. It broke my heart to not have a happily ever after but that is just the teen age girl in me. It was truly a joy to read and on the first couple of chapters had words changed as I told you befor. Your work flowed well and I am very said to say bye to No, Ava,Assie, and James. Lots of love from the swim caption!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was having a bad day and you totally made it! You have no idea what this meant to me! Thank you!

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Some one is playing with you chapter love. Words have been changed. For example
I was slightly disappointed that I wouldn't get to ride in his garden shed again but I nodded. He stepped out of the carriage and I climbed on his back.
That should be arms not tool garden shed. Many others have been changes as weel you might want to go threw and re edit but all in all I love it so far!

Author's Response: Thanks for the update! You're really sweet!

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This was so cute! I knew James was going to propose! And his little speech, awh it was adorable:3 I didn't review the last couple of chapters as I read them before I went to sleep, sorry hahah, but I liked it when aspen's mum called N.E.W.T.s worms!
Sophia:)

Author's Response: Thanks so much Sophia! You're too sweet!

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I loved the hogsmeade visit, I would've done exactly the same with loads of sweets and clothes! However I've banned myself from spending lots of money as I'm trying to save up to go to Australia! I'm quite sad about Dom's miscarriage, but I think it should make her a stronger person? And the quidditch match, I loved it! Some authors don't write quidditch matches very well, but yours was great even though it was short :) good chapter!
Sophia:)

Author's Response: Yeah, I hope it does. Thanks so much.
-Claire

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Omg James and aspen are so adorable! And I knew she would eventually show him her secret room! I could be a seer;) and quidditch nazi James, I think it's hilarious! But it is true, you have to work really hard to be successful. I get told that all the time in netball, gymnastics and athletics! Although sometimes it's said harsher! I thought the journals were great, my favourite was the one when aspen was 8. I don't know why, they were all good, that one was my favourite though. Great writing!
Sophia:)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, Thanks so much. You're way too sweet. Thanks!
-Claire

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I'm actually really sad about Jamie! And it makes me feel really bad that I've forgotten the names of the others that died! I feel like I should go back and find out, just to respect them. See, this is how amazing your writing is! I'm so glad aspen found lorcan, she's saved a life at the age of 18, for someone who had minutes of life left! Wow. Just wow. And I have absolutely no idea what is in the forest but its tbh it's terrifying. I hope when we do find out (if we do?) that its not too scary;) That made me sound like a total wuss. Oh dear:') I can't believe aspen got drunk and slept with James also! That was a surprise! I thought the party was great, and the chapter again was amazing! Well done!
Sophia:)
P.s it make me laugh when you called us beautiful hpff unicorns:')

Author's Response: Me too, it's okay. Thanks so much. You make me smile till it hurts. Thanks again Sophia!

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Wow! This chapters a lot different to the others! It was so intense, i couldnt stop reading! I hope the others missing will be okay (I forgot their names!) another great chapter!
Sophia:)

Author's Response: Thanks Sophia, you are so sweet!

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Sorry I'm doing lots of reviews in a row, I read fanfics on my iPod and I'm kinda hooked to this one;) I thought the quidditch trials were great, hope there's a match or something in a chapter? And I loved the secret room! Maybe aspen might show that to James one day? Ahh i'll just read and find out;) Looking forward to reading the next chapters, that project was a great idea:) hope you don't mind me reviewing even though the fics completed, it's just so amazing I have to review every chapter!
Sophia:)

Author's Response: Wow, that means a lot. You'll just have to read it! Thanks again!

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Omg joey is so sweet! And so is his name! I think if Dom decided not to keep the baby it wouldn't be the same as I think it kinds of fit in with her character and would be strange not to, and would sort of make her seem like a different sort of character? Okay that didn't make any sense but oh well:3 and James and Aspen falling asleep, aweeh! They are so cute! Hahah;)

Author's Response: Yeah, I love Joey. Yup, it's so Dom. Thank so much for the review!

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Loved the prank and the potions incident;) and wow, I'd love to have 7 siblings! I have 3, but they're all younger than me! This was a great chapter:)

Author's Response: I have two, I'm the middle! Thank you so much, you're so sweet!

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Omd, I love this fic already! It's quite different from a lot I've read, which is great and I love all the characters! (Actually only the nice ones;) it has a great start compared to most other fanfics! :)xxx

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you!

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The only comment I have is that none of your information its consistent with each other. I know your already done but wow nothing matches and I'm just confused because of the inconsistency but otherwise its an amazing story.

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about it, I tend to do that!

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Great start to a story makes me wanna read more :-)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks!

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Eep! You're a Whovian too?! You just officially got more awesome :D

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. You're awesome too!
-Claire

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Whoa,I have seven older siblings too O.o
Except that while there are 2 sets of twins and a set of triplets, one of the triplets is a girl. Shane,Shawn,Shawna,Jayk,Josh,Keith,and Keegan

Author's Response: Wow, that's insane. I can't believe that!
-Claire

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I'm loving the story :)
I have one tiny comment though. I hate to be a grammar nazi,but the spelling was a little distracting. However,I would be happy to help you edit/proofread this if you want. Let me know either way. And again,love the story :)

~Alex

Author's Response: Sorry, my spelling is terrible and I'm trying to work on that! Thanks! You're so sweet!
-Claire

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I-I can barely t-type I--I am cryinng so hard-d from the bedr-room thing. Sobbing. I don't kn-now why-y. You are an amazing author, and i love this story!!!

Author's Response: Aw, that was probably the biggest compliment ever! Thanks so much Dana!
-Claire

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ASAH! I KNEW IT! Boy: James. Girl: Jamie. Twin girls: Jamie and Ally.
Boy and girl twins: James and Jamie. Twin boys: James and Sirius

Author's Response: Nice!
-Claire

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