more please! Think of it as a Christmas gift Report Review
Oh my god where to begin...
The NM's and their unique onesies, James with his hat and pimp cane, Ally and her plant Mindy, James and his pygmy puff.
So many favourite quotes, but here's just a few -
"I think you'll have Hogwarts in flames by the end of the week, but well done James"
"Princess Ally of Mars" - Love it!!
"Um Alls why is the plant wearing sunglasses?" - LOL
I LOVE next gen and this is bloody brilliant. I actually have tears of laughter from reading this :D
I love James and Ally they're both as insane and cute as each other.
I LOVE the fact James has a freakin' pygmy puff called Melissa (so manly) and I Love that Ally bought it for him!! :D
I felt so bad for Ally when Mindy died - especially since James always took the mick out of her for having it as well as hating the plant. And I think James' letter to Harry was pretty cute and the fact he signed it "The sexy son"
Totally shipping James and Ally AND Frankie and Dom!!! Both of them are such adorable couples!!
There were grammar and spelling issues which can be fixed, but you could always get a beta.
P.s If you do need a beta message me on the forums, my name's potterfan310 Report Review
FYI: You switched from greenhouse 2 to greenhouse 3, Ally said greenhouse 2 while James toldthe NM's greenhouse 3Author's Response: Okay thanks I'll fix that :) Report Review
luv it! A hummingbird, how did u get that?Author's Response: My fave animal ^.^ Report Review
Awww the fluffyness!!! Dom and Frankie are cute when they're not making out in public.Author's Response: Thank you!! Report Review
I wanted to write review a week ago,but I forgot and I'm so sorry.
I really like your story and I absolutely adore all characters,but Ally is the best one.And Sexy Son,too.^^
I'm really sorry about Misty's death.She was a good plant...=/
Letter is one of the best moment in this chapter.
Please don't give up and update soon.Can't wait to read next chapter.^^
~LovingMarauderAuthor's Response: Update will be in the cue tomorrow :) thanks for the review! It means to much! ^.^ Report Review
Wow! That was an exciting end. Was the mark over the Potter house or somewhere else?Author's Response: It wasn't over the Potter's house...or was it ;) Thanks btw :D Report Review
Head boy and girl!! We're doomed! haha. It's really getting interesting.Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D Report Review
Really really cute and funny. I like James and Ally's immaturity and am looking forward to see them grow.
You've got quite a few typos and grammar issues going on. You might want to read back through it and make corrections.Author's Response: Thank you I shall at some point go back and sort it out :) Report Review
awesome once again, james is so cute. keep going loving the story!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter will be up as soon as possible! Report Review
loving the onesies!!! haha. also really good writing. keep it up!Author's Response: Ahaha thank you! I'll try! ;) Report Review
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