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Review #1, by Janner Together

4th May 2012:
I enjoyed the story but you seem to have an issue with the spacing. It does spoil the reading.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! And it is very peculiar with the spacing, as I did not intend for that to occur...perhaps when I copied and pasted the story onto the site there was some sort of error? Sorry about that, but thanks!

xo MBTN xo


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Review #2, by SerpentineOffering Together

4th May 2012:
What a beautiful one-shot! I thoroughly enjoyed this! You're writing was beautiful - as always! :) I honestly don't think I could even offer some constructive criticism.. it was in my opinion perfectly simplistic. Stunning. I'm going to have to add this one to my favorites! Wonderful job!

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Author's Response: Thank you ever so much! I'm very glad you reviewed. You are too kind. It was meant to be a bit more detailed, though it was too explicit for the site, so some had to be cut and revised, but I am very glad it pulled together and you liked it!

xo MBTN xo


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