naw. i really want to give rose a hug :(

please update soon!

Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing :) ill update as soon as i possibly can!

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This story is absolutely amazing! I love the characters and overall its just extremely well written. Great job! I look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll try to gt the next chapter out as soon as possible :)
~siren song

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you are a really good writer and I can't wait for more of this story!! it is really AWESOME!

Author's Response: thank you so much :) that really means ALOT to me :D the next chapter is about 45% done
~siren song

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who is the girl in the chapter image pic she locks familiar but i dont know what from

Author's Response: she's lily collins. she's in The Blind Side as well as Mirror Mirror and some other things :)
~siren song

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Can't wait for more! Its cool how you are slowly piecing together her life.

Author's Response: more will be coming soon. thank you so much :)
~siren song

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The contintuation of ninjas! I love ninjas. Anyway that must have been one hard punch if James went out cold after it. But great chapter and please update soon!

Author's Response: yes, ninjas :D who doesn't love ninjas? and it would have to be, wouldn't it? i will update as soon as possible :)
~siren song

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I know I'm being nit-picky and critical, but James and Tessa didn't stalk Rose and Scorpius- they stalked Rose and Luke.
I really like this story- it's really good!

Author's Response: sklfh sjkhfs omg i can't believe i did that; ugh -.- geez i fail at wriitng even my own story. thanks for reading and reviewing :)
~siren song

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haha, this was really funny!
my friend tried to do a high kick and accidentally kicked herself!! XD
great chapter, please update soon :)

Author's Response: hahaha, lol fail to your friend :P i will deffinately update soon :)
~siren song

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This was probably your funniest chapter yet! I love the ninjas. Please update soon!

Author's Response: thank you so much. i will, don't worry :D

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alright so this is my first time reading this and it is like an amazing story!!! either way, i only know the first riddle...ironic cause the guys had just told me it...anyways the answer to the first riddle is 'nothing'. thats all i got.

anyways, keep up the great work! the story is amazing so far!

Author's Response: yep, that is correct, haha. thank you for reading and reveiwing and i will :D
~siren song

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Whoo hunger games;) story amazing dont stop writing xx

Author's Response: I love the hunger games! Thank you so much and there is absolutely no way I'll stop writing :D
~siren song

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YAY! Tessa and James have a date planned. I am so excited. I love how you kind of make it not a big deal, since Tessa really likes Louis, but I am so excited. I feel like breaking into a song. Sorry, I am super hyper, don't know why. I really can't wait to read their date scene! It should be adorable. I also think it is super adorable how overprotective Rose's cousins are of her, I wish I had cousins that always looked out for me like that (maybe not to the same extent, but still)!

Sorry for my craziness, but your story got me excited :) Hope to see an update soon!

Author's Response: Well, not quite a date but still! Hahaha, you do sound really hyped up :P anyway, I'm in middle of the next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon :)
~siren song

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Hey, this story looks like its going to be epic. Well, it's already starting. Anyway, this is awesome and I was just wondering if you wanted a Beta. It just that I noticed a few grammar mistakes, because I'm a grammar nazi, and was wondering if you needed help.

Anyway, awesome story. James is a hottie, Louis is a cutie and Tessa is misunderstood. But they are all awesome. Keep up the good work.

Florencebell xo

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

I'd love a beta. Do you know where I could get one?

Again, thanks!
~siren song

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Haaha, I really like this book:D
When can the next chapter come out, I really hope soon!:D

Author's Response: i'm glad you like it :) the next chapter is about 30% done

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I love this book omg!:D I just started reading it, please update next chapter soon.

Author's Response: thank you so much :) the next chapter should be out soon :)
~siren song

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1. nothing
2. eye

the story is really pretty! you are a really good writer! cant wait for the next chapter!
much love,
daria xx

p.s: luke wood is the name of a character in one of my favorite fanfictions in this site.. its called bedposts and broomsticks and its really good

Author's Response: hahaha you are too good at riddles for your own good :P
thank you and the next chapter is going into the queu really soon :)
really? hmmm...i shall have to read this fic...

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I love this idea of getting a secret pen pal... Even though my school is tiny it would be a lot of fun... I am jealous! Haha well of course, great chapter again. I think it is adorable that she struggles so much with the riddles but Louis always seems to be there to help her out :) I love the part when Rose screams at James, haha that was hilarious. I also feel so bad for Tessa during the memory stages, I am really curious to see how she has changed and how the gap between the two scenes is bridged. It will be really interesting. I can't wait to keep reading! Also, I am terrible at riddles, I feel just as lost as Tessa.. Can't wait to see the answers to those first two :)

Author's Response: thank you :) i feel horrible for her because i have to put her through it all :P anywho, next chapter is going ino the queue sometime this week so hopefully its out soon :)

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Good story so far XD!
I think the answer to the first riddle is nothing? am i correct?!
Keep writing on
xoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxxoxox

Author's Response: thank you :D
you shall find out in the next chapter!
thanks for reading and reviewing!
~siren song

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Good story but its kinda confusing when the story goes from present to past... Other then that good job...

Ya im the first review fOr this chapter :D AYWAYS. BYEEE

Author's Response: im sorry it is so confusing :( look to the tense. sometimes I confuse myself but mostly the present is written in past tense and the past in written in present tense. wow. i just realised how messed up that is when i wrote it :/ anywho, i hope that helps.
thank you :)
~siren song

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love how you do the flashbacks
curious on who Julia is
Continue the story! :)

Author's Response: thank you and i will :) continue reading!
~siren song

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the constant jumping around confuses me alot although i am intrigued about what happened to tessa

Author's Response: i'm sorry that it confuses you :( i tried to make it as least confusing as possible but prehaps i should space it out a bit more...
tessa's past will be revealed in good time :)
~siren song

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so looking forward to seeing what the induction is all about!

Author's Response: read on, my friend!

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Hey! I have really been enjoying this story. I like all her interactions with Louis and James and Freddie. Also, I really like the flashbacks! It is really interesting. I love how you showed her softer side by showing how she comforted Layla at the end of the induction ceremony. I also love the use of the hunger games quote, that was funny. I really can't wait for an update, and see how things turn out!! :) yay!!

Author's Response: thank you so much :D your comments mean so much to me. the next chapter is already in the queue so hopefully it will be out soon :)

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Oh! I loved this chapter! I can't wait to read more of this story and I can't wait to see what happens for the initiation part! Anyways, great chapter! 10/10

-Claire

Author's Response: thank you :) the next chapter is about 50% done so hopefully it will be out soon
~siren song

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Okay, I really like this so far! I struggle with depression and everything, so stories like this really help me and all, so I want to thank you for that. You have a really nice start so far and I can't wait to see where it goes! I feel like Tessa is like me in some ways too, I'm not that brave, I have depression and I'm a Ravenclaw. Anyways, great chapter! Can't wait to read more! 10/10

-Claire

Author's Response: thank you :) i struggled with depression but things are alot better now. i hope your ok!
tessa was written based on me so we must have been twins in another life or something :P
~siren song

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