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Review #1, by Harry and Ginny New Year's

4th June 2013:
wow! the ending of this chapter is awesome! I'm glad that James managed to save Lily before the marquee exploded and I wonder what's going to happen now!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Ooooh, you just wait and see what happens!

Thanks for reviewing! xx

(Omigosh, another 10? Thank you!!)


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Review #2, by RosieWeasly11 New Year's

1st June 2013:
omg it so coolio xxx

Author's Response: Haha, thanks xxx

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Review #3, by HellYeahShipsJily New Year's

31st May 2013:
So firstly i wanna say that i absolutely love this
story. I am a hardcore Jily shipper and this fulfills my
dose of Jily fan fiction. The only problem is i
sometimes feel like they aren't speaking their own
words, cause of the way you write it, know what i
mean? For example James told courtney ' it aint
gonna work', that doesn't really sound like him : oh
and sometimes you overuse something that
degrades your writing level (with is great btw) like
you used 'meh' alot in the beginning. Hope this helps
you out, KEEP WRITING NEVER STOP, oh and is it
okay to ask you to kinda update sooner. :D
anyway cant wait for the new chapter cheers ;D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love Jily too, they're like my OTP (but I have loads). My characters seem a bit non-canon, but I promise I'll fix that, and I'll try to cut down on the "meh"s (I say it a lot in real life you see). But thank you soo much! I'm writing the next chapter but unfortunately I'm in a bit of a rut atm and I've got a lot going on at school, but I'll try to update as soon as possible! xxx

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Review #4, by albuslilyjamespotter New Year's

30th May 2013:
I LOVE IT!! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA POST THE NEXT CHAPTER???

Author's Response: I'M WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW! IT SHOULD BE UP SON!! XXX

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Review #5, by Niki Christmas

17th April 2013:
No...Just. no. I like the story and I like that they are back together, but I personally don't think that they should have gotten back together until they had resolved their issues (James being a bully and arrogant arsehole, Sirius being a creeper instead of the Sex God/Awesome Dude we love him to be, and Courtney being a bitch in general.)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. They're back together for now, but there will be more complications (hopefully) xx

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Review #6, by Harry and Ginny Christmas

14th April 2013:
aww they're back together? I'm glad about that but I'm not trusting James and Sirius completely after how they acted towards Lily. they should talk with Courtney, after Lily leaves, and tell her to stop being so vindicted towards Lily! can't wait to read next chapter!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I thought it was about time for Jily to have a reunion *tears up* Well, you're right to be suspicious, I'd give them a big slap and tell them to get lost if I was Lily. I'm going to start writing the next chapter soon - I hope you like it when it comes up!

Summer x

(I can't believe you've given me a 10 for every single chapter! *sque!!*)


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Review #7, by Harry and Ginny Awkward

14th April 2013:
that was extreme you know? Courtney pushing Lily down the stairs is too much! Reading next chapter now!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Extreme is what I do best ;D Courtney's a stupid bi- scuit. xxx

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Review #8, by Harry and Ginny The Plan - Phase Two (The Ball)

14th April 2013:
I'm hating both Sirius and Courtney right now! they're supposed to be James and Lily's best friends! going to read next chapter now!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Ugh, Sourtney (LOL, I fail at shipping) is like my nightmare ship - but don't you worry, everything will turn out okay :) xxx

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Review #9, by Harry and Ginny Hospital Wing Visits

14th April 2013:
oh come on! isn't time for Lily and Courtney to stop being mad at each other?! or rather Courtney being mad at Lily? I'm loving this fic so far but please, I want Lily and Courtney to be at least civil towards each other. going to read next chapter now!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Seeing how upset you are about Courtney and Lily's argument, I think I might have them make up in the next few chapters (: But you'll have to wait and see!xx

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Review #10, by Harry and Ginny The Plan - Phase One (Shortcuts)

14th April 2013:
oohh I hate Courtney! I bet that she heard Lily coming and kissed James or maybe she even put him under a spell. going to read the next chapter now!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Courtney = a load of people at my school I don't like, so I'm basically giving them all a big kick when I write her :P Thank you for another review! xx

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Review #11, by Harry and Ginny Evans and Potter on their First Date

14th April 2013:
oh my! Courtney is turning evil! I wonder what Lily will do and whether or not she'll tell James about this plan of Courtney and Sirius.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Yessshh, Courtney is evil *cackle cackle cackle*

Thank you for reviewing! xx


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Review #12, by Harry and Ginny Death Stares and Deserted Snogging

14th April 2013:
Courtney needs to calm down! she needs to see reason and I want her and Lily to be friends again! reading next chapter now!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Courtney is one of those girls who go mental when it comes to boys :3 I was planning on making "Lily and Courtney enemies 4eva", but I might change my mind :) xx

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Review #13, by Harry and Ginny Lily's Truth

14th April 2013:
great chapter this one! going to read next one right now!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it - I thought this chapter was a bit weird :S

xx


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Review #14, by Harry and Ginny James Potter's Dare

14th April 2013:
I feel bad for James because he is hurting for seeing Lily with Sirius. going to read next chapter to see what Lily will say.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I hate hurting Jamesie :( But I had to do it ..

Thank you for reviewing xx


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Review #15, by Harry and Ginny What Goes Down In Hogsmeade

14th April 2013:
wow! Sirius asked Lily to be his girlfriend even though he knows that James likes her? I wonder how this will go, so I'll have to read next chapter!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Yeah, you go read next chapter :D

My Sirius is a bit nutty, some characters might be a bit OOC from the book :3
xx


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Review #16, by Harry and Ginny The Biggest Secret Of Courtney's Life

14th April 2013:
wow! Courtney likes James? this is getting interesting! going to read next chapter!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Haha, yep, Courtney likes James ;)

Thanks for the review!xx


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Review #17, by Harry and Ginny The Worst First Day In History

14th April 2013:
another great chapter! and I'm loving how Lily is trying to avoid admitting that she's starting to fancy James. btw I found these two words that were misspelled so I corrected them, if that's okay with you:
sqaure - square
hel-lo - hello

going to read next chapter!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

What the hell is a sqaure? *hits self in face* and that hello was supposed to be like that, the way people say it (sometimes) when they emphasise the two syllables. But if I'm wrong, Imma go kick myself XD

Thank you very much! x


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Review #18, by Harry and Ginny The Longest Train Journey Ever

14th April 2013:
great first chapter here! it's funny to see how Lily despises James for now but I'm going to read the next chapter to see how everything goes. btw you wrote "Vernon Dursely" when it's "Vernon Dursley".^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I came into Unanswered Reviews and I saw all yours I was like "Whoa!" OMG, did I write that? *facepalm* am going to fix it asap! xx

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Review #19, by Tess Christmas

10th April 2013:
What! What! What!! I need the next chapter!! Please I am begging you!! By the way this is Tess on my iPod!! It won't let me log in to my account on this!! Hehee please post the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Haha, I guessed it was you ;) I'll put up the next chapter in a while because I've got a few other stories that need updating and a few one-shots to put up, but hopefully it won't be too long xx

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Review #20, by albuslilyjamespotter The Longest Train Journey Ever

10th April 2013:
Amazing! I love it!!! x

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! x

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Review #21, by Logan Costa Christmas

8th April 2013:
I was enjoying the mind games, ah well lets see where this goes, brilliant writing keep it up
10's from me a few times in a row and i hardly ever give out 10

Author's Response: Yep, you'll see where this goes *evil smirk*
OMG, you gave me a 10! Thank you so much!


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Review #22, by Logan Costa Awkward

8th April 2013:
Team Lily of course, you really paint a good picture of the er. Jamessiriuscoutrney i also like how potters parents are portrayed, your book started good, but not great, now its amazing,

Author's Response: When I think of James's parents, I think of Molly and Arthur, so I thought I'd make them similar to them. Yeah - Evans and Potter had a wobbly start, but I'm glad you like it now!

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Review #23, by Logan Costa The Plan - Phase Two (The Ball)

8th April 2013:
Devillish clever that courtney is, a real spiteful demon, i really love how you write

Author's Response: Well, evil people usually are very clever. Thank you so much! x

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Review #24, by Logan Costa Hospital Wing Visits

8th April 2013:
Lily=Dead, simple, subtle but it was so perfect highlight of the story

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! Your reviews are very constructive x

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Review #25, by Logan Costa The Plan - Phase One (Shortcuts)

8th April 2013:
Blast ended skrewts didnt exist then, you have to take it all into account, brilliantly cruel,

Author's Response: Yeah - I just had a look and I realise that know :P I'll change it x

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