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Review #1, by potterfan310 Too Late

7th November 2012:
Oh my god!! why have I only just read this!
I Love Al and Viv as well as James.

All I can say is poor James, it's nice to see what he was feeling when he saw them getting married. I feel bad for him, he really loves Viv but he doesn't want to hurt Al.
Deffo adding this to my fav's :D

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: Hello there,

I don't know, it's been up for ages! I know, poor Jamsie, life sucks for him at the moment. I thought I was quite important to have this from his point of view so we realise how he got there rather than him just turning up out of the blue.

Thank you so much! Hope to see you round, the next chapter of Twist of Fate is half done so look out for that. Thanks again,

GirlOnTheSidelines x


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Review #2, by Gabriella Hunter Too Late

27th April 2012:
Hello!

Told you I was going to be right over here! And so, here I am and may I say that it was brilliant?! Brilliant. I saw no mistakes and I really loved James's thought process, he's not nearly as dumb as people were making him out to be you know. Haha. Anyway, that ending had my jaw dropping at his nerve! But from his POV, I can understand and I didn't like how he wanted to hurt his brother but when you're in love, you're in love, right? I wouldn't know but Merlin, I hope no hot dude that I was in love with barges in on my wedding! :o
Can't wait for the next collection, its a really good idea!
Much Love
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello again!
Awh thank you! I wasn't so sure about it, I didn't know if people would really get where my Jamsie was coming from so thanks. I don't think he really wanted to hurt Al, he was just really, really mad and heartbroken - he managed to get himself out of there before he did anything stupid. Oh poor Viv - we sure do put our females through a lot don't we?
My next one will will either be from Lucy Weasley or Rabastan LeStrange (I know, two completely different people but hey, it depends on how fast DoF and Paradox are updated). Thank you!

GirlOnTheSidelines.


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