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Review #1, by dobbys_socks Don't Stop Believing

7th May 2012:
Hey there, it's dobby_socks from the forums and I'm sooo sorry I didn't read this earlier but I've been extremely busy. Thanks for entering by the way!

Firstly, I thought this was really cute! The main thing I was looking for is that your fic fit the song, and yours did perfectly, so well done hun! I love how it switched between what was happening for each character so your readers got a full perspective of the story, and how each different section worked with a few lines from the song.

There were a lot of grammatical errors and your sentence structure was a bit dodgy, so I'd suggest a Beta. They can help you fix all those parts and make your story even more awesome.

All up, I really loved it and think you did a fantastic job. I'll post a blog with the winners in it, so keep your eyes peeled and don't stop beliving that you can do it (pun intended).

~dobby~

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