NO! Did not see that coming. Good job!Author's Response: and that was the exact response I was looking for! enjoy the rest of the story, and thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
Such a sad ending :( one of my favourite stories thoughAuthor's Response: sorry! :'( it will get better - I promise. But it's based on a dark time, so something bad had to happen, right?
thanks for the review, hope you enjoy the rest :) Report Review
This is the chapter I've been waiting for since I started reading this! And it was really sad! I knew it would be, with the whole star-crossed thing, but I was really hoping that that would be because of how Regulus died in canon, not because of this!
Sorry, that was me rambling. I've calmed down now :). I loved the emotion in this chapter. It was great, and it made it seem so real. I would have loved to see more depth on the Order's reactions, especially Sirius. They trusted Adrienne, and in their minds, she betrayed them.
Please update soon!Author's Response: I hope I did it justice then! Yeah, I definitely went down a Romeo and Juliet theme - but it gets a bit better than some of you might expect.
Don't worry, I am keeping to canon - it just made the story work better in my mind, as this way helps the story to keep to canon more - you'll see!
Thank you though, I'm glad I got the emotion there -I was worried it was going to be all wrong and people were going to be disappointed! I know I didn't really focus on their reactions - I was kind of in a massive hurry to get the chapters out - but it is covered a little bit more in the next chapters.
Updates already up, m'love :) enjoy! Report Review
Just one word! Brilliance.-Author's Response: just a few words in reply then - thank you :) Report Review
Whoa... My heart was beating so fast through this chapter- we all knew everyone was going to find out sometime but now?! In front of literally everyone?! I thought Sirius might have committed murder, lol, It was looking so hopeful as well- they were going to run away and live happily ever after :'( I think that the mark of a good author is one that can make you feel emotion through the story and get attached to the characters and you have done both :) I can't believe this has only got a few more chapters to go- it's been such a great story, the quick updates are good too!!! :DAuthor's Response: Yeah, I like surprising you all ;) I love writing dramatic scenes as well - so I really enjoyed this chapter - although I was worried it wouldn't meet everyones expectations. You seem to be positive though!
thank you so much though, I really appreciate hearing that I'm actually writing well enough for readers to feel those kind of emotions :)
Yes, I know! Really not long now! hope you enjoy the last few chapters, and thanks for such a lovely review :) Report Review
OMG. That's all I have to say. And that it made my day when I saw you updated. I was trying to come up with a ship name for Regulus and Adrienne but I am stumped! Pleaaasse keep updating!!!Author's Response: aw, thank you :) glad you liked it!
I know, I've tried, you've tried, every other reader has tried - we just can't seem to do it! Maybe it will come - but with their names it seems unlikely!
Regulus likes to be proper and use full names anyway - maybe it's for the best ;)
Updates are on their way :) Report Review
aw, I love it! Regulus is one of my favourite 'background' characters. it's just getting exciting now! I love the pairing :)Author's Response: same, it's so nice to see so many people who feel the same! He's so dark and mysterious - and the amazing J.K.Rowling left us with so much to play with!
thanks for the review :) Report Review
I think you need to go back and proof read... Pink elephants and garden fences everywhere! Love this story still.Author's Response: ooh, really? Sorry! I seem to be constantly tired and banging out these chapters in a rush - to fix the spacing issue I now have to type them all up into the actual posting box - there is no more taking my time and doing it bit by bit in a word document - so it means there's a higher likelihood for mistakes.
I'll be more careful, promise! thank you though :) Report Review
Now that's just plain cruel!! How could you do that to us loyal fans who want nothing more than to read your story and enjoy it? And then you go and leave us like that!! You madam, are almost as evil as Voldemort!! No fair! Well, besides that cruel place where you left us hanging, great chapter. It's sad that she doesn't talk to Lily or James anymore and that she didn't even know they were getting married! I wonder what's going to happen when she sees them. If it was me I'd be pretty pissed! Well you better update again soon, because I can't stand not know what's gonna happen with her and Regulus!! As always, great writing 10/10! =]Author's Response: mwahahaha - didn't you know I'm secretly Voldemort? ;)
seriously though... I love surprising you readers - and even though I know it annoys you - you secretly love it too!
Yeah, Adrienne's really separated and isolated herself - I'd say it's the one big problem that's come out of her and Regulus' relationship.
But having to chose is a real life thing, so I thought I'd address that. Plus, it adds a bit of fun later on!
Updates are on their way, hope you enjoy them! Thanks for the lovely review :) Report Review
Gah! Oh my god!! This was amazing!! I loved it!! Holy crap!! And so sad!!! What's going to happen now? Oh my god!! You have to update again soon! It would be cruel to just leave us loyal readers hanging here! Please, please, please update again soon! 10/10! =] ~Author's Response: woah, that amount of exclamation marks can only mean good things! thank you :)
I'm trying not to be too cruel - so updates are coming steadily... enjoy them! :) Report Review
lovely chapter,cant wait for moreAuthor's Response: Thank you! The next chapters up, and the next one in the queue, so please do have a read :) Report Review
Ugh, poor Regulus! They have to stick together. Seriously, so cute together :) Great story, can't wait for an update!Author's Response: I am sorry to disappoint then! Read on ;)
Sorry for the rubbish updates by the way, I feel very mean :(
Thanks for the lovely review though :) Report Review
please write more pleaseAuthor's Response: sorry! :( been extremely busy, but once I find my plan again I'll be on it as soon as possible! x Report Review
Finally a Regulus Black love story, that's enjoyable or not a one-shot! Love it Author's Response: Seriously? Thanks so much! The nice thing about writing Regulus/OC is that there isn't much out there... (so less competition!) Thanks for the kind words :) x Report Review
I'm back again! I promised a longer review and I shall deliver :D
First of all, I'm so sorry I didn't reply after every chapter, hopefully this review might make up for it a bit! But I do want you to know that I loved every chapter and every word of them!
Okay lets get this started...
Regulus is like...I can't even...I mean, this boy gets me in fan girl mess, it's quite sad really. In my defense both Sirius and Regulus do, and as we all know Sirius/OC's aren't hard to come by. I complain about the lack of Regulus/OC and completely went past this one in my regular searches D: What is this madness?! Please for the love of Merlin do not abandon this, you're amazing and this story is amazing.
Oh no he DIDN'T, siriusly Regulus?! Siriusly?? You had to look at her? *facepalm* Silly boy. Regulus is beyond perfect as well as Addie, their lovey relationship doesn't even make me cringe :D Which shows so much about your writing, it terms of how believable and real it is.
I'm literally on edge throughout every chapter praying to Merlin that Regulus or Addie don't get caught by someone (Amos/Slytherins/Lucy so on) Eeppp! So scary! I know what would happen! And I really don't want to know D: But I do also...but ahhh!
Now with this whole Sirius business...
I really don't want Addie to be with him, let Regulus have the girl for once Sirius :'( Tehe!
But siriusly, I love you for making a Regulus/OC that I can actually enjoy and not cringe at!
Your writing is wonderful, simple and well thought out :D I love that I can feel a lot of your passion for this story throughout your writing, which makes me want to stick around until the very end :D
Now I will be waiting (not so patiently) for the next wonderful chapter! If you need anything whatsoever don't hesitate to message me here or on the forums :)
xxAuthor's Response: WOW! Holy mother of merlin, the length of this review! I'm flattered!!
I'm so glad I'm not the only one though! I first decided I wanted to write a Regulus/OC when I actually found a decent one, but I can't remember what it's called now, so I can't recommend it, sorry!
But yeah, then I started imagining senarios, and somehow came up with this fic! But I digress... the basic thing is that I'm the same as you - Regulus works that mysterious, dark and interesting (as well as brave) thing that definitely makes my heart flutter!
But yeah, I loved writing that moment! I knew everyone would be like *omg he so didn't* and the thought really made me laugh! Plus, I just love a little bit of drama, and as the fic gets heavier from this chapter it was a good way to kick it off :)
Well, you'll have to read on to see, I think you'll like the next chapters -they're very interesting!! (although you may cry...)
Feeling so mean now though, doing little hints like that ;)
But truly, thank you for the absolutely lovely comments, you really make me feel a lot more confident in my writing and I promise I'll try to get the update speed sorted out because you've been such a sweetheart :)
Thank you for the offer, if I ever do I'll be sure to call on you! Lots of love to my loveliest reviewer xx Report Review
Definitely not cliche love :)
Merlin I love Adrienne!
And as always, I love this, and can't wait to get to the next chapter!
xxAuthor's Response: oh, phew! Being cliche is a big fear, there are definitely hints but I'd like to think it's not MASUVELY cringey :) thank you x Report Review
My two loves, Sirius and Regulus! Yay!
I promise a big review soon, I usually could drawl on and on but I'm so anxious to get to the next chapter!! Ee!
xoAuthor's Response: They are amazing, I'll say that! :p
But that's quite alright, what a compliment really!
thank you x Report Review
What...I can't even...ah!!!
Giggling like a little fan girl, I love this Regulus!
Your writing and flow is so superb, it's all so natural!
Eep next chapter I go :D
xoAuthor's Response: Giggles?? Awww, yay! I managed to make someone laugh! :) :) :)
Thank you very much though, I'm so glad to see you're enjoying it and the way I've written it :) x Report Review
Love, love, love!
I thank Merlin that in my (usual) desperate search for a decent Regulus/OC that I found this, and I thank HPFF Forums for the recommendation and naturally I thank YOU!
xoAuthor's Response: That forum post really was lovely and complimentary, and I'm so glad someone was kind enough to mention my work!
Lovely to see you like it, please do keep reading!
thank you x Report Review
Reasons why I love you/this story.
1. You've created a Regulus so true to how I envisioned him.
2. You're writing is quite flawless, comfortable, witty and just plain enjoyable.
And last but definitely not least...3. You've actually created a Regulus/OC (which I love already) and for that I'm forever in your debt!
Till the next chapter my dear!
xxAuthor's Response: Awww, you're too sweet :')
I'm so happy you like him, I just hoped for the best and went for how I imagine him - but glad we're on the same page :)
And that's SUCH a compliment, considering there are far, far better writers than I on HPFF - it's just that most of them aren't writing a Regulus/OC!
(I wisely chose a quiet field.)
Thanks for the lovely review :) Report Review
Well I for one am happy you updated... it has been FOREVER!!! But I understand life, writer's block, etc. I felt like this was a bit short though, or is that just me. Oh well, I am just happy that you updated. If you ever need inspiration just look at all the reviews and that really nice recommendation that regulus_lover gave you. The people need you! haha I digress.Author's Response: Yes I know :( I used to be so good as well! But life...
Anyway, I agree, I'm sorry! Totally still not into the swing of things, but I've recently updated quite swiftly two chapters practically in a row, so I hope they make up for it!
Thanks for the lovely review :) Report Review
aww, poor Reg! I wonder what everyone is gonna think now, are they gonna suspect that something is happening between her an Regulus? Update again soon, I can't wait for more! =]Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see ;)
I am sorry for the awful update speed though! Hope you're still reading :) Report Review
Loved this chapter! How much they are in love and all... I liked the scene when Alecto noticed the way he looked at her...
Brilliant work! I missed this story!Author's Response: Yeah it's cute isn't it :)
And yeah, I wanted to show that Alecto is that kind of cruel, cunning kind of Slytherin whereas her brothers more of a brute. I'm not sure if it entirely fits J.K. Rowling's characterisation, but I could argue that Alecto might have changed! ;)
Thanks for the lovely review, and so sorry about the awful update speed! :( Report Review
great chapter! I still love regulus! yay! And I feel kinda bad that now she's gonna have to use Sirius, that's gonna hurt him. But oh well, update again soon, I want to see more of regulus!! =]Author's Response: Aww, everyone loves him!
But yeah, I felt the same, it's not too bad - she kind of wimps out and doesn't really do the whole shebang, so hopefully it won't be too hard to read!
Because we all still crush on Sirius too!
thanks for the lovely review :) Report Review
great chapter, i can't wait for you to update! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
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