Hey I decided I was going to read this like you said I should! I think you should turn it into a story. I think it could have potential. There are specific details you could hold onto. Draco should take her on a date for her birthday! Maybe give her a pretty necklace, or anklet. Okay well I do hope you write more on this, so cya next time!
~kylee~

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No wonder she thought he was just using her. Missing her birthday ... *shakes head* I would like to see more of the reasons why Hermione felt like he was using her. Does Draco have a difficult time expressing his emotions? If so, why? :)

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i think its a great one-shot!!! but it would be interesting to see it as a short story!? keep being awesome

lOony

Author's Response: thank you so much!!! :D

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I enjoyed reading this... I hope you decided to make it a short story!

Author's Response: thank you!

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Very intriguing for a one-shot! I would definitely love to see more...but I'm not exactly sure what I would want to see. Probably just more details about their relationship, and Draco proving to Hermione that he is with her because he loves her and not because he is using her. Keep it up!

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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Aw. that was so cute! I like how Pansy and Ron are together! You should definitely make this into a story!

Author's Response: i think i definitely will! thank you! :)

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Or you could maybe have the news article by rita skeeter in the story... Like "trouble in paradise?" by rita skeeter
^completely unoriginal title but you know what I mean!

Author's Response: that's a great idea! I think i know what the next chapter is going to be about... :D thank you!

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I liked this oneshot a lot! I think it's sweet!
Um if you have the time could you possibly turn this into a short story? That would be great!
Uh... Possible ideas... Um not sure... You could possibly add a bit more history into it... If you know what I mean... Like have a bit more on stuff leading up to them dating etc.
But as long as it has a happy ending I'm fine!

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aw this was cute & funny! i laughed the entire time with a smile. :] haha i love dramione so much! hey do you rp? just wondered! see
i told you i'd read it. when is the other chapter for the other story comin up too? update soon!

Author's Response: I'm currently working on the next chapter for Blurred Lines and it should be posted by the end of the week :) I'll make it a long one to apologize for the wait. thank you so much!

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please continue =] it is off to a great start

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I absolutely loved this! So good! You should make a story out of it:)

Author's Response: thank you! I'm definitely considering it (:

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