This looks really interesting and it's been well-written. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: thanks- the next update will be next week, once I've finished my exams.

 Report Review

I really like it so far, please continue! I'm still slightly confised, which I guess is to be expected at this point. Keep up the great work and update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you (: I'll try to update soon

 Report Review

Love this story already. Although longer chapters won't hurt! Btw, James is awesome, Merryn seems cold and aloof like you surely intended her to be, and Tom's a darling. And those Pearl Slides and shades were real igneous. Dont make us way2 too long for the next chapter.
-Dizzy.

Author's Response: Hello, thank you! Glad you like the characters and the gadgets.

Tasha

 Report Review

Love it so far. It would be great if the chapters were a little longer :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I was rushing a little with this chapter, which is why it was shorter.

Tasha

 Report Review

hi!! I loved this chapter even more! I kind of wish it was longer though- I'm very interested in seeing how the relationship between James and Merryn unfolds, and I already love the cast. Tom is awesome :D

-looking forward to next chapter!

Author's Response: Heyy, thanks! I was rushing a little with this one, which is why it's shorter. Tom is brilliant, I have to admit! I want a Tom (: Updates should be... expected at some point but maybe not in the next month or so, I'm afraid.

Tasha

 Report Review

Hi!! I love this! keep writing :D and I'm off to the next chapter (though I should be studying for finals :P)

Author's Response: hii, thank you! Ahh, don't let me distract you from finals... which is exactly what I'm doing to myself :3

 Report Review

ooo DRAMA!waiting for the next chapter!

Author's Response: thank you (:

 Report Review

You have an interesting story idea so far! But, and I'm assuming the story is supposed to be set in New York City bc you mentioned the Upper East Side, Soho isn't a red light district. Haha it's actually a really upscale shopping and residential neighborhood!

You said the story was inspired by the A-Team, so Idk if that was something the movie alluded to, but I thought I'd let you know!

Author's Response: Hello, thank you. That might seem a little confusing- it's set in London but for reasons I'll explain later on, Merryn came from New York's UES. Yes, I know what it's like- I've stayed there and loved it. She's not supposed to be a 'lady of questionnable intention' or anything like that- Moore's just an old man who didn't think her outfit was appropriate for the office.

Thanks,
Tasha

 Report Review

i really like this so far.

Author's Response: Thank you xD

 Report Review