Such a wonderful story!! You have a wonderful way with words! :) Report Review
LOVED IT!!! Some parts throughout felt a tad forced and awkward in conversation, but perhaps that was how you meant it. Over all, great story, idea, and it helped that you give a wonderful flow to your writing. Maybe you should try to write a published work, not just fanfiction. I would read it.
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I LOVE this it is so sweet, Keep up the good work. But why did this have to be mature it seems like it could have been 15+. Report Review
This was absolutely adorable! I loved it!! Report Review
:) that story was adorable. :) :) :) Report Review
Fun fluff!! I've enjoyed it a lot. Small edit in this sentence: Not to mention the less than welcoming conversation with Parkinson, nee Nott, at least Scor is happy to see my. --> Pansy is "Nott nee Parkison," and "happy to see me."Author's Response: Thanks so so much for the heads up, it is now fixed! :) I'm glad you enjoyed my story and thanks for reviewing! Report Review
HI, sorry for now reviewing as I went along. this is the most refreshing and upllifting storeis of Draco and Hermione that I have read. You did an excellent work of fiction that could have easily been part of the original story line. If the part of after 19 years had not been entered. Some may say it is to sweet and not enough action, but the facat is there is enough ugly and rough action out there. The fact that the Malfroy seem a bit to nice, hey , hope pervails.. and that life can be good again. the childrend were so endearing and even the small haughtiness of some of the purebloods were displayed but then cleared up. I have to say that overall, I give you and A+ for the thought and content. I am not a critic or reviewer who can tell you how to make it better or what may have been done differently. I can only say you gave me some time of very pleasurable reading and I like your style and manner of expression, The way you give Draco and Hermione both outlets so we know what they are thinking and feeling.
I do hope you continue to write. if not for harry Potter additional stories but for your own telling.
I have read many so far of this pairing and some have been very good, Yours was the best so far as how it left me feeling. thanks you and I do hope to read more of your work.Author's Response: Seriously Thank you!! This review has completely made my day, and I have needed that I am suffering from writers block :(
Anyway, thanks and I am working to get my next story posted as soon as possible, but the validation takes so much time... Thanks again, and I do plan to continue writing! :) Report Review
both chapters were very interesting and enjoyable. I like the way you lead into the meeting of Scor and Iome in such a sweet way and her taking control of the meeting when draco came to find him. She was protective and thoughtful. yes I do like what I have read so far, Hoping to read much more. Report Review
Such an adorable story, I loved it. Scorpius sounds like the cutest kid ever!Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :) Report Review
It's really nice to read something cute and fluffy for a change, it seems that most D/H fics are angsty and dark. The choise of tense (present instead of past) surprised me at first but it doesn't bother me any more, since your writing style is really beautiful (:Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed my story! Report Review
When Scor asked if he could call Hermione, Mum, I started bawling. I thought it was the sweetest thing ever. Your writing certainly captures the emotions of your audience. It is truly phenomenal, good job.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved Scor in my story, he is just too adorable! Report Review
This is a very cute story. It stays true to characters and I am really enjoying it. :) Good work!Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
i think the ending is perfect and you're right, it just seems to fit, and it does feel right. I loved this story. You're very talented.Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked my story, and the ending as well! :) Report Review
Aww I am sad that this story has come to an end too but it was a sweet ending. Of course I wish my labor with my daughter seemed as easy as you wrote Hermione's labor...it's always easy in books and movies haha! I am also surprised that Draco wasn;t worried about Hermione dying in child birth like Scorpius was. Overall - Great story, perfect characters, sweet ending...job well done!Author's Response: Thanks! I was going to go into Draco being worried, but he hid it well, I mean he had to be strong for 'Mione. Thanks again for reading! :) Report Review
Wow. I was almost in tear when Scorpius explained why he was worried - fear to loosing his mom again and he and Hyperion being alone..
Nice short ending to the story. But enjoyed every chapter of it.Author's Response: I know, he is such a sweet child, I'm glad you liked it! :) Thanks for reading, and reviewing! Report Review
no lie i am crying! it's so beautiful!?!?!
p.s. what happened to astoria?Author's Response: I hope after reading more of the story you found out what happened to Astoria, but she died in childbirth...Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
This fanfic is SO AMAZING! I've literally started crying like 20 times reading it. It is truly amazing.Author's Response: Thanks! I had such a fantastic time writing Scor and making him the cutest little guy ever! Thanks for reading! :) Report Review
This chapter made me teary eyed. Awesome as usual.Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed my story and this chapter! :) Report Review
Made me cry! In a very good way! Great Great story!!!Author's Response: :) Yay! I was a bit misty eyed too! Thanks for reading! Report Review
This has to be the cutest fanfic I have ever read! Congrats on the wonderful job done! :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am so glad you like my story! Report Review
All characters played out well. Loved the birthday wish making by Scorpius. As always wonderful.
Loved "Mondays", but "Chance Meeting" is by far my favorite.Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that you have enjoyed this fic, last chapter is waiting for validation!:) Report Review
As always, I love this story!Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
i am a massive fan of yours! i absolutely love mondays and Chance meetings is addicting! :D i love the way u write Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am in the process of writing a third fic, called Mystery Man, I will have it up once this one is finished. I am just waiting on validation, so hopefully soon! :) Report Review
Great chapter!!! Love the cuteness and how Draco was actually nice to Hermione because of his son!!!Author's Response: Thanks! I hope as you read, you continue to enjoy it! Report Review
Glad to get two more chapters for the story.
It was very intense and very emotional chapter. Loved how every character played out.
Absolutely love your introduction of Blaise in the chapter. after Hermione and Draco, I like Blaise character very much.
Lucius is so every sweet. Love Ginny and James very much.
Thank you for the update. you are the best.Author's Response: I enjoy writing Blaise, although he doesn't have too big of a part in this fic, but I do like him. Thanks so much for your review, the next chapter is up just waiting on validation, I hope you enjoy the rest! :) Report Review
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