{reviewid: 2787243, reviewer: 'BitterRabbit'}
16th May 2013:
It was fabulous :) good work
Author's Response: Thanks deary! The chapter after next is the awesome one!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2787093, reviewer: 'NailahM'}
15th May 2013:
Fantastic chapter!! I gasped. I laughed. I cried (not really). Love the irony of Lily accusing the boys of possessing chloroform when they only meant to grab shampoo, and then it turned out to be chloroform in the end ^__^ Great, great stuff
Author's Response: Gee thanks so much! That means a lot and this fabuliscious review has definitely brightened my day. Thanks for taking the time to stop by and I'd love if you'd keep reading and maybe drop me a line..?
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2785773, reviewer: 'Hagridlover71'}
8th May 2013:
Amazing, yet again, and I can't wait till the next one! Sirius/Molly development xD
Author's Response: Thank you and the next one is up now!!! And yes, Molly/Sirius development!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2785424, reviewer: 'albuslilyjamespotter'}
6th May 2013:
Wow!!! So much suspense!! I love it!! :) do you think you could do more on lily and James' relationship?? Hehee x
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you love it! And yes I'm definitely doing some more Lily and James stuff. For a Jily centric story, that particular pairing has been practically non-existent! So please keep reading and reviewing! Thanks for taking the time to tell me!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2785048, reviewer: 'BitterRabbit'}
4th May 2013:
hehehehehe I loved it *insert squeee here*
Author's Response: Well thank you! Will Molly get her man? Or will I kill her in a mysterious spoon related accident??? Stay tuned to find out!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2784770, reviewer: 'albuslilyjamespotter'}
2nd May 2013:
WOW!!! Amazing!! Please post the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I have indeed posted the next couple of chapters and would love very much if you were to read them! And y'know, leave me a little review? Tell me what I'm doing right or wrong, whether you have any fun ideas or just want to say you've read it and it wasn't terrible. Thanks for the review, I hope to hear from you again!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2783480, reviewer: 'BitterRabbit'}
23rd April 2013:
This is rainbow fabulous
Author's Response: Thank you my dear I'm glad you like it! Please review again!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2762098, reviewer: 'Hagridlover71'}
5th January 2013:
*shudder* the Molly doing a strip dance.thanks for the nightmares...
The rest was brilliant, however!
Author's Response: You are most welcome m'dear! Who wouldn't want that lovely image haunting their every waking hour? :D Thanks for the review!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2762097, reviewer: 'Hagridlover71'}
5th January 2013:
Oh My Rowling that was another amazing chapter! I laughed so much!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for dropping by!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2761590, reviewer: 'pottergal7'}
2nd January 2013:
Yea I do celebrate Christmas. I got alot of nice things too. An ipod. A pair of Tom's. Some cute sweaters and the movie pitch perfect. How about you? Anyway happy new year! Though I bet you celebrated new years six hours before I did seeing as you live in a different time zone. Anyway I love the book #winkyface! Anyway love you! Merry Christmas / new years!
Author's Response: I'm sorry it took me so long to respond! Life has been hectic. I'm glad you enjoyed your christmas and new year! I feel like you haven't reviewed in ages and I miss my cyber stalker! Thanks for the review!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2759794, reviewer: 'pottergal7'}
24th December 2012:
Hey sorry its been a while. The websites been doing this weird thing where I cant find your book. Anyway I love the chapter so much. I hope you keep writing for a long time!
Author's Response: Hey Merry Christmas! Or whatever it is you celebrate ;) Yeah the website is updating their server so it's being a little weird and messing up a bit. It's only temporary though so no need to worry! And thanks! I shall be writing for a very long time! I have erm re-edited the edited stuffs again so it's a leeetle different. I'll take the xmas holiday as an opportunity to get it all done. Pfft, who needs science GCSE's anyway? I don't need to revise! Anyway thanks for reviewing and I shall put the chapters through validation as soon as the queue is open again!
-Jess :D
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{reviewid: 2757935, reviewer: 'Grace3'}
11th December 2012:
Hahaha this is a good chapter i must congratulate you on it. I specially like the Lily and James part and how he looked all jelous towards Hayden. Great job liked everything about this chapter keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. I would love if you were to read the other chapters. Thanks for the review!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2757901, reviewer: 'Grace3'}
10th December 2012:
This is a really good story it has everything that is looked for in a story love,fights, and friendships. I really like this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! This may not be especially canon but I do try to make the characters real and not two-dimensional. Thanks for the review!
-Jess
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{reviewid: 2755752, reviewer: 'pottergal7'}
2nd December 2012:
I know I'm really sorry. I love and always will love your book. Its just I haven't been right since my friend moved away. But I read the chapter and I loved it as much as I always have. Again sorry its been so long. I have school and I have a big audition on next Saturday so ive been practicing my clarinet every day. I'm just really busy and a little depressed. But I will try to review more and more.
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{reviewid: 2754977, reviewer: 'pottergal7'}
27th November 2012:
Hey- sorry its been so long. I wonder if u even remember me. I hope so. I read it loved it and I'm hoping we start talking more and more. Ill catch up on my reading and you catch up on. . . . . I don't know something. Bye
Author's Response: Hey there! My word it's been ages hasn't it? I mean I've been spewing out these chapters just for you and I thought you'd fallen off the edge of the earth! I'm glad to see your review and thank you ever so much for reviewing! I hope everything's okay with you although you don't sound chirpy like ya used to.
Thanks so much for the review and chapter four is almost redone, so it'll be out soon!
~Pottergirl7
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{reviewid: 2753755, reviewer: 'Hagridlover71'}
21st November 2012:
Ooooh awesome :) great plot development. one thing...
"so I stuck my tongue out his back"? typo or am I being, well, me again?
oh, and write me more lines ;)
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{reviewid: 2752638, reviewer: 'Star12222'}
14th November 2012:
This is awesome! Like all your other chapters and stories, my I add ;) claps for you indeed lol, well done on another great chapter!
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{reviewid: 2752627, reviewer: 'BitterRabbit'}
14th November 2012:
that was fabulicous babes.
LOL JK who even says 'Babes'???
Loved the chapter it was like red velvet cupcakes: perfect
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{reviewid: 2751575, reviewer: 'BitterRabbit'}
9th November 2012:
yay tis sooo good :3
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{reviewid: 2751551, reviewer: 'Star12222'}
9th November 2012:
This is Great! It made me laugh and I love all the characters ;) Well done! Cheeseballs! XD
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{reviewid: 2751548, reviewer: 'Star12222'}
9th November 2012:
That was great! It made me laugh so much and all the characters are amazing ;) Well done! Cheeseballs! XD
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{reviewid: 2751365, reviewer: 'Hagridlover71'}
8th November 2012:
Loved it. Chapter images is awesome!
Author's Response: Uh huh! Thanks for the review!
~Pottergirl7
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{reviewid: 2751363, reviewer: 'Hagridlover71'}
8th November 2012:
Great edit. Where do you get your ideas from?!
I take off one point for the morals.
Rude.
Author's Response: Come now dear, morals aren't necessarily a bad thing! Okay maybe but no need to remove points hon :D Oh and my ideas are taken from the deep dark depths of my mind where no one dares go.
~Pottergirl7
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{reviewid: 2750424, reviewer: 'Snorter'}
4th November 2012:
Ah! Pretty,pretty please update. I just read this at 11:15 in bed, my mum in the other room. Anyhow it was so funny that my snorting/giggleing woke my mum up and she got really angry! LOL
Author's Response: I will try and update as soon as possible but at the moment I'm editing so you will probably want to read over it all again. I've only just uploaded the new and improved second chapter though so it may be a while. Maybe in future you should giggle a little more quietly so you don't get heard ;) that's what I do! Thanks for the review, keep reading!
~Pottergirl7
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{reviewid: 2750280, reviewer: 'Anon.'}
4th November 2012:
Woohoo!
Everyone hates each other! wowzers!
Author's Response: I know! I hate seeing them hate each other but I love writing conflict! It's all part of the plan! So don't worry I'm sure they'll all be best buds again soon enough. Thanks for the review, keep reading!
~Pottergirl7
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