Reading Reviews for Betting on a WallFlower
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Review #1, by seeminglyharmless The Bet.

11th April 2012:
good plot so far, but i have a few tips.
1. stop switching tenses- stick to one, but don't flick between them.
2. don't capitalise random words; yes they're nouns, but not proper nouns.
3. remember your full stops, and make sure to leave a space after a comma.
4. i know this was an introductory chapter, but because i want to read more of this, try and make your chapters longer!
update soon,
happy to be your first review!

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