This was really nice. I liked how you wrote about Harry being finally so happy with his family after all the horrors he had to go through. I always imagined he would have a special relationship with Lily, as fathers always do with their daughters. Some of the moments were really nice, I especially liked the one with the flowers in her hair.

Maybe the only problem I had was that the events followed one another randomly, as in Lily was a little girl, then she was growing up, then she was a little girl again. But it's not really a serious problem, so no worries. Thanks for linking this story, it was nice reading. :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

The little girl after she was grown up a little were supposed to be flashbacks -_- I was having trouble conveying that here. Sorry it was a bit confusing!

Thank you!

~Sara

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Aww this was so, so sweet and just so lovely. I really loved the lyrics, I agree that they really related well to Harry and Lily. Like all dads, it was great to read about Harry realising his little girl was growing up. I liked the progression too - it was nice seeing Lily as a little kid to getting married - made me feel really sad for Harry during that! Just a lovely one-shot, nicely written :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

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Oh this was such a sweet oneshot! I absolutely love this song as well and its such a wonderful wedding song between father and daughter! I loved all the little snippets into their life, it was just so sweet to see Harry with Lily and putting flowers in her hair and then later her asking for him to do it again. I thought you did a great job with emotions in this with Harry feeling like he is losing his little daughter and everything. The cake that his kids made for him was just so sweet as well at their attempt to make it and decorate it with mops or brooms lol! Really thought this was such a cute oneshot about their father daughter relationship and how she will always be his little girl no matter what. Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~
Recensio 2012

Author's Response: Thank you! I love this song :) Harry and Lily seem to fit it :D

Thank you!

~Sara

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Hey, I'm here with your requested review! Sorry this took a while!

Anyways, I think this was an incredibly sweet song fic. I love how it's all in Harry's POV as he watches his daughter grow up; you really captured that parental tone. The song worked so perfectly with it, and I love how you described the lyrics with Harry and Lily. It flowed together so nicely. I have no critiques or anything. Just skim it real quick to catch grammatical and spelling errors.

I'm sorry I don't really have much to say. This is such a sweet fic, and you did a wonderful job :)

Awesome song fic! Good job! I'd love to read and review anything else you've got :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I've always loved this song, and it just seemed to fit with their relationship :)

Yeah, I posted this pretty much as soon as I finsihed it so I dodn't really proof-read it. I should do that...

Anyway, thank you!

~Sara

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