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Review #1, by Chazzie Forever Daddy's Little Girl

10th August 2014:
Hello!
Just so you know, I'm crying. That was beautiful, and the song choice was perfect. It really felt so touching and heartfelt. I loved the way that the descriptions allowed for a bit of flexibility in the reader's mind. It was nice to see a fanfic with Harry and his daughter, as I think other stories tend to focus on either James or Albus when they show a parent/child relationship. Very well written, thank you for sharing it!
Lottie

Author's Response: Hello!
I'm sorry I made you cry! I've noticed my stories tend to make people cry...I wonder if I should be worried about that :/

I've always loved this song, and I'm glad you liked it with this story. Lily's one of my favorite Next-Gen characters, so I'm glad I got to write about her!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Sara


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Review #2, by lady_devil Forever Daddy's Little Girl

7th March 2014:
For the Blackout Battle!

Omg I just want to say I really loved reading this song fic and my eyes were beginning to get watery as I kept reading. I am defiantly putting it in my favourite.

There's nothing much to say other then it was a beautiful father and daughter story leaving me in awe the whole time. The way you put it was perfect from the song to the words and especially the part when she is born, perfect little paragraph.

Defiantly checking out your other stories! :)

Author's Response: Hi! I'm glad you liked it. I always thought of Lily as a Daddy's girl, and I've always wanted to write a story to this song. It was pretty simple after that. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
~Sara


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Review #3, by Your Secret Santa Forever Daddy's Little Girl

14th December 2013:
Ho, ho, ho and Merry Christmas Sara! Someone tells me you've been nice this year, not naughty at all!

See, usually I don't go for song fics, but I felt like reading something uplifting today. This did it. It makes me feel so warm and fuzzy.

So what wasn't perfect about this? That's right - nothing. This was beautiful. From Lily's characterization as a young girl to her at her wedding day, this was too sweet. Absolutely adorable.

As a writer, you really have tons of potential and talent. I find it really hard to write this kind of stuff, and you just did it perfectly.

I felt like being an ol' grandma and crying into scraps of lace at this part:

"I don't know. You're my baby girl. I feel like I'm loosing you," he said, as she smiled. -- you killed me there. Their relationship with one another was so beautiful, and I loved it. So beautiful.

Expect another visit from me soon Sara and happy holidays!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've always loved this song, and then I decided that Harry should get a nice little family moment too :) Thank you so much!

~Sara


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Review #4, by shadowycorner Forever Daddy's Little Girl

5th August 2012:
This was really nice. I liked how you wrote about Harry being finally so happy with his family after all the horrors he had to go through. I always imagined he would have a special relationship with Lily, as fathers always do with their daughters. Some of the moments were really nice, I especially liked the one with the flowers in her hair.

Maybe the only problem I had was that the events followed one another randomly, as in Lily was a little girl, then she was growing up, then she was a little girl again. But it's not really a serious problem, so no worries. Thanks for linking this story, it was nice reading. :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

The little girl after she was grown up a little were supposed to be flashbacks -_- I was having trouble conveying that here. Sorry it was a bit confusing!

Thank you!

~Sara


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Review #5, by maskedmuggle Forever Daddy's Little Girl

22nd May 2012:
Aww this was so, so sweet and just so lovely. I really loved the lyrics, I agree that they really related well to Harry and Lily. Like all dads, it was great to read about Harry realising his little girl was growing up. I liked the progression too - it was nice seeing Lily as a little kid to getting married - made me feel really sad for Harry during that! Just a lovely one-shot, nicely written :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

~Sara


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Review #6, by slytherinchica08 Forever Daddy's Little Girl

20th May 2012:
Oh this was such a sweet oneshot! I absolutely love this song as well and its such a wonderful wedding song between father and daughter! I loved all the little snippets into their life, it was just so sweet to see Harry with Lily and putting flowers in her hair and then later her asking for him to do it again. I thought you did a great job with emotions in this with Harry feeling like he is losing his little daughter and everything. The cake that his kids made for him was just so sweet as well at their attempt to make it and decorate it with mops or brooms lol! Really thought this was such a cute oneshot about their father daughter relationship and how she will always be his little girl no matter what. Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~
Recensio 2012

Author's Response: Thank you! I love this song :) Harry and Lily seem to fit it :D

Thank you!

~Sara


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Review #7, by Ravenclaw_Charm Forever Daddy's Little Girl

17th May 2012:
Hey, I'm here with your requested review! Sorry this took a while!

Anyways, I think this was an incredibly sweet song fic. I love how it's all in Harry's POV as he watches his daughter grow up; you really captured that parental tone. The song worked so perfectly with it, and I love how you described the lyrics with Harry and Lily. It flowed together so nicely. I have no critiques or anything. Just skim it real quick to catch grammatical and spelling errors.

I'm sorry I don't really have much to say. This is such a sweet fic, and you did a wonderful job :)

Awesome song fic! Good job! I'd love to read and review anything else you've got :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I've always loved this song, and it just seemed to fit with their relationship :)

Yeah, I posted this pretty much as soon as I finsihed it so I dodn't really proof-read it. I should do that...

Anyway, thank you!

~Sara


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