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Reading Reviews for Hold My Heart
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Kelly When I'm Alone

9th June 2013:
I love Fred George fanfics so much. Good job :')

Author's Response: Again, thanks! I'm still not convinced it was necessarily a great idea to, you know, let other people read that. But thanks!

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Review #2, by Kelly Where You Stand

9th June 2013:
I liked this one a lot better than the other chapter. Your
transitions are a lot better. I almost cried because this was
the first fanfic I read about Neville and his parents and it
just hit me that he was all alone (with no father figure) and
no loving mother (having a grandmother is not really the
same). :'( Crying in a good way. Great job I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks! You're very kind.

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Review #3, by Kelly In The Midst Of Battle

9th June 2013:
I really like how much you can say in a sentence. You have
really good word choices. But I also wish that you wouldn't
Jump around a lot. For example, you went straight from
when Ron was back to the middle of the Hogwarts battle.

Author's Response: I just reread all of that for the first time since I wrote it last year and... um...I'm very sorry. I wish that I didn't jump around a lot as well. I also wish that I hadn't posted that on the internet. To think, it could have stayed unread in some lost file for years...

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Review #4, by Mysterious Where You Stand

14th April 2012:
This was so sweet! I loved the subtle hints about the rest of the character's lives. This is very good and please write more soon!:)

Author's Response: thank you very much for the review!
I have a few more chapters pre-written and will try to update ASAP.

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