This is really good please update/ finish the story!

Author's Response: Don't worry i will next will be up soon I was just on a vacation but I'm back now and I will keep writing!

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love the story so far :) keep writting

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I really like that you change the POV its a really neat idea :) I really can't wait to finish this!

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Great! I love how it's in different P.O.V's, not just one person. Well done! :)

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Pretty well done, I'm pretty excited to get into the book a bit more. Great start to a story! :)

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I really appreciated your review on my story!!!. Anyway i really like the story. And i wanted you to read my other story which i have written and it is waiting validation cause i really like your story and i was wondering if you could give me some tips on writing.
Thanks!!! Bye! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! And I would be happy to give u advice
All you need for a great story is a big imagination with details, interesting characters, and interesting plotline

Again thanks for reading my story and I can't wait for the rest of yours :)

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I LOVED it! Oh, and thanks for reviewing on all my chapter on "letting the darkness take over"! You really make my day!

Author's Response: Your welcome and thanks! :)

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you are so evil! Je n'aime pas cliffhangers

Author's Response: aw thank you that's what i was going for :)

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You have to write more!

Author's Response: i will and the next chapter is up for validation glad you like it :)

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i agree it was quite short but it was still good can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: yeah i was half-asleep when i wrote it but the next chapter will be longer i just finished typing it up so it should be up in at least 3 days

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