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Review #1, by AlexFan Pikachu

5th April 2012:
It was a good start but just one teensy tiny thing that really bothered me was that James had green eyes. Because you know James doesn't have green eyes they're brown like Ginny's, anyway I know it's a small things but it's always the little things that stand out.

Author's Response: Sorry, I'll look into changing that.

Thanks for reading anyway :) It means a lot.


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