Ah, loved the update. The bit at the beginning was awesome, and I loved the names of the Lestrange couple. The plot there is really awesome. Also, the conversation between the two sisters was very good. And the last bit with the marriage arragement, I think it's my favorite part so far. I really, really liked it! Report Review
Hehe this is making me all giddy! AH Report Review
Ahhh I love this story so far!Author's Response: Thank you! :D Report Review
Ohhh, I like this alot. Like alot alot. I'm of course going to continue this because I'm really excited to see where this plot goes.Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I'm really glad you like it!!! Report Review
I'm so happy you updated!
This was really good, and I can really see why Bella was so sceptical -the Madam didn't sound very convinving, did she?
I think you've got everyone's character's perfectly, especially Bella, it was exactly how I would have expected her to react.
I also liked the bit with Druella, I'm now curious to see what will happen with Abraxas, Lucius and Andromeda, especially now that she will find out about her own "prophecy" as well.
You mentioned Bella thought she had seen Madam Badriya somewhere again -is that some sort of key point in the story, or just a coincidence? God, this story only has two chapters up and I'm already hooked. It's really, really good, please update as soon as you can, I['m dying to know more!!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)
No, I guess she did not sound very convincing at all -I bet I'd be skeptical too if I was in Bella's shoes.
Well, about Bella mentioning that about Madam Badriya... I really can't tell you now, can I? It may a key point, but it may be completely irrelevant. Who knows?
I'm glad you like the story, and thank you for your reviews, they really do mean a lot! Report Review
I love this!
Everyone is like they should, perfectly in character, and the plot is great so far, as well.
I love Bella's interactions with Druella and her sisters, they're perfect.
Only one chapter and I'm already hooked...
I can't wait until Voldemort comes into play, as well!
Please, please, please, update as soon as you can!Author's Response: Thank you :)
It really means a lot, to know that you've captured the characters...
I'll try to update as fast as possible...
Once again, thanks!! :) Report Review
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