4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Marika Platform 9 ¾

8th May 2012:
overall this was a very interesting chapter but a little short

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Review #2, by AmberLovegrove Platform 9 ¾

9th April 2012:
It's really good but I think Sirius should be a bit more cocky. The use of the word "spectral" didn't quite fit. How about "I wasn't prepared for what hit my eyes" or "And what a site it was". Very well written, keep up the good work!

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Review #3, by padfoot394 Platform 9 ¾

8th April 2012:
nice beginning...waiting for the next chp..all the best!

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Review #4, by decembergirl92 Platform 9 ¾

8th April 2012:
first of all if its your first story then congratz from my side, and welcome to HPFF (as an author)
nice start here, and go writing like a natural.
well the chapter is pretty short so i cant give much comments but here you go with the best statement i liked in it:
“Sirius Black the Third! Get down here this instant!”
happy writing:-)D

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