Hm, I liked it, even with her bad choice in judgement. ;) I think it was a bit short, and could definitely be lengthened with description, detail and what not. After all, showing is better than telling. Especially with emotions attached to something this big.
Anyway, again, I liked it! :)

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Continue IT! I love it, and even if one person likes it, it means you should carry on! :} Or I might cry ;}
DON'T make Lia go through with! She will just get hurt and I don't want her to be hurt D:
But I'm guessing she will ^^ the first time, chapter gives it away unless she does and then Al comes to the rescue just before it's too late ;}

Anyway I totally didn't even realize chapter two was out let alone the third one :P I can't wait to see what happens next so update again soon! :}

~BlameItOnTheNargles

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This is an amazing start to a story and I am hooked already! :D
I can't wait to find out what happens, I really want to know what her secret is and whats happening as I feel so confused right now but I bet it will all unravel sooner or later XD
I love Lia already and I have no reason why but I feel connected to her already even though the piece was so short so well done! :D
Update again soon XD

~BlameItOnTheNargles

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. This is my first proper story and I find it really encouraging to get reviews from amazing authors like you!
I'll update again this week

Rose :)

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I love her personality and the premises of the story.

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