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Reading Reviews for Kaleidoscopic
8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by deceptive_serenade Swallowed In The Sea.

9th February 2013:
So THIS TIME, I'm deleting my account entirely, which means this review would've been deleted, but it was a beautiful review, so I'm leaving it again. Ta-da!

We haven't talked in a while, I miss you. Nevertheless, hope you are enjoying life :)


So I've decided to read your story. I love Luna/Rolf! I'm writing one too, did you know? :D

Okay, so I review while I read. So here I go... :)

That's Luna. Ooh, that's the best description of her I've read in a while - maybe even since the books. Love it love it love it. And the way you say it is so beautiful and free flowing - just like her. WOW. *adds to favourites after first paragraph*

I think censorship and freedom of speech really speaks to the majority of people in the world. Most people feel that they are being oppressed, even in a society where freedom of speech is encouraged - yet silently (and fatally) discouraged. If that makes any sense :P As in, people can say what they want - but not really, since the consequences are horrible. Sometimes fatal.

I think the fearless aren't only the ones who lead... I think the fearless sometimes fear the most. I think that the people who lead are the ones who believe the most. But that's just my opinion :)

Draco is one of my favourite characters for that reason - that he is so easy to read, but no one chooses to read him properly. It's just the sad fact for most people, I think.

They broke my character and left shattered in their wake.

Ohmygod. I love this line.

You know what? As much as it breaks my heart, war does effect people - and it probably effected Luna.

I felt obligated to save her.

And now I love Rolf.

Wow, he's a very well-thought out character. He matches Luna. I feel as though they can balance each other because of it. That's probably one of the most important things about relationships, in my opinion :)

'I do not believe' there couldnít be a more hateful, close-minded, idiotic phrase in the whole English language.

This is very true. Most people don't care to believe, either.

Wow. Rolf. Wow. You. Are. So. Admirable. I understand where Atticus comes from - as in, those creatures aren't real - but Rolf is right, it's very unprofessional.

Aw, he's so sweet. :)

I LOVE COUPLES WHO BECOME FRIENDS. I don't believe anyone can be married without also being best friends. I think that's what love is.

There are many different kids of heroes. (I go into that in YCMM, too. :)) I love how you named Draco a hero, as well. Everyone was a hero in their own way, I think.

Aw, Rolf. Falling in love. He makes it sound so beautiful. Which it is. :)


So. Say hello to your newest fan! :D I enjoyed this so much, you are a wonderful writer. Why didn't you tell me? ;D I loved every single word of it.

Author's Response: Ahhh noo what happened this time? hahaa Thank you so much for re-posting it that means so much that you thought and took the time :) I know, I miss you too, [ :( ] I'm so sorry I haven't been review on this site but i still have been avidly reading it, don't worry :)

I will have to have some words though because it seems like since i havent been reviewing things in the story have been getting a little out of hand. I mean FINALLYY we found out what Al secret was - i mean took him long enough, but now all of this is happening? ah stressful!

I am enjoying life thank you, I hope you are too!

P.S I tried to send you a couple of e-mails a few months ago, I don't know it they went through? On your googlemail account?

Thank you so much


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Review #2, by Lunylovegoodlover Swallowed In The Sea.

15th September 2012:
Surprisingly enough, I had decided to leave a review for this story even before I began to worry about offending it. I love Luna more than any other character in HP, but I always have the hardest time writing her and I'm always a little apprehensive about reading fanfics about her, just because she's so special that it's almost impossible to get her right. You captured her perfectly, and I love how you pulled Rolf in.

Author's Response: Awww thank you soso much for leaving the review. It's so lovely of you, and thank you for such positive feedback. It means so much and you've put a hug smile on my face.

Thanks again Lunylovegoodlover :)


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Review #3, by Bethan Swallowed In The Sea.

22nd June 2012:
Ohh my gosh! The way you describe luna is absoloutley amazing, you should be so proud that you have this amazing ability to write :)

Author's Response: Aww thank, thank you so, so, so much. This really made my day, and you've put a huge smile on my face.

'you should be so proud that you have this amazing ability to write' Aww this is sooo sweet! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I hope you have an a m a z i n g day Bethan! :)


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Review #4, by Ramita Swallowed In The Sea.

16th June 2012:
I just had to respond your to your review response. Couldn't resist. So I logged out. :P


And I cannot tell you anything other than the fact that I broke the rules, so I can't keep my account. :( But my new account is shiny!!


- Ramita :)

PS - of course. I lovelovelove your writing! Send it to:

ramitaarora23 @ gmail. com

And we can talk and share ideas and whatnot :D

Author's Response: Haha! It's like a funny little conversation we're having here!

Well... I do try to be the best. What can I say... :) Ahh I joke, I joke. But I just really didn't want to loose them so.

Ohhh. Naughty. Don't worry I won't tell anyone.

Hahaa! IT'S SO COOL. IT'S LIKE, TOTALLY AWSOME! (AVPM quote there, hehe)

Seriously? Thank you so, so, so much! YAY, Ohmygod. Well I literally /just/ finished the Lavender Brown one-shot I was talking about earlier, so I might send you that if that is okay?

Ehh, this is so exciting! Thanks again! :D


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Review #5, by shoveitsunshine Swallowed In The Sea.

11th June 2012:

Well, this was amazing. Luna/Rolf is a wonderful pairing and I love your interpretation of them. Beautiful writing.

Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much, you've put a big smile on my face. I'm glad you liked it! You think my writing is beautiful? Thank you so much lovely.

Have an amazing day shoveitsunshine! :) xx

By the way, your user name made me laugh :)


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Review #6, by Lydia Swallowed In The Sea.

13th May 2012:
This is so good, i love the concept 10/10;) xoxoxo

Author's Response: Hehe thank you so much Lydia! It means a lot :) xoxox

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Review #7, by leopard Swallowed In The Sea.

28th April 2012:
i really loved this one shot it was beautifully written, well done :)

Author's Response: Thank you so so much! This made my day, and it meant so much to me! Thanks again, Have a great day leopard! :) xx

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Review #8, by Siriusly3 Swallowed In The Sea.

4th April 2012:
This is absolutely breathtaking. Wonderful. Beautiful. Your writing is just so stunning I am literally speechless. You characterised Luna so well, she was broken so perfectly in character and Rolf, I haven't seen a lot of him and now this is fixed canon in my head. I got shivers reading the beginning and the dictionary definitions splitting up the paragraphs were genius, perfect.
My favourite parts were pretty much everything in italics, the layout was so inspired, you chose the perfect lines to highlight. Your vocabulary and comparison of Luna to a kaleidoscope is fantastic and she's such a unique character but her POV seems totally natural.
Oh, I just adore this! A resounding 10/10!

Author's Response: 'This is absolutely breathtaking. Wonderful. Beautiful. Your writing is just so stunning I am literally speechless.' EPPP! Thank you so so much!

I was a little worried about this one-shot to be honest, I thought it might be a little bit weird or I don't know abstract or something, but you've put my mind at rest.

I really wish you could see the huge smile on my face because of you're wonderful review, you have be blushing here. I'm so glad that you liked Luna, I worked quite hard to get her down to a point, so I'm glad you thought I got her right. And Rolf as well, I agree, because we never ever met him we are left with a blank canvas and that can be quite daunting. But I finally got him, well the him in my mind. Someone who is uncommonly kind, completely open-minded, he's grounded, a hard-worker but his head is a little bit up in the clouds. Anyway I'm rambling now thank you so much for the lovely review! Have a great day Siriusly3! :)

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