Please update :) I like how this is more slow paced than a lot of others :) xxAuthor's Response: i will soon :D Report Review
i'm glad i read a few other reviews first. Don't listen to whatever these people are saying about it being rubbish. This is your first story, and (a) I always think Dramiones are cute, no matter how unrealistic and (b) I like that you've actually started this slow, unlike so many similar Dramiones. I think you could try to make the chapters a bit more lengthy and flesh out some of the characters and your plot as well. A note of caution before I end: I think you ought to try to find something in this story that will differentiate itself from all the Heads of Houses stories there are for Dramiones. Otherwise, it could end up being the same as everyone else.
Great job writing, I can't wait to read more. Report Review
Please please please make Draco not become all mushy too soon!! That seems to be the case nowadays for most Dramiones. I just love when I see the relationship being built and the tension that arises.
Like that Godric and Salazar were in the plot. I think it would be great if you kept using them- maybe not every chapter, but they'd be unique to your story. Report Review
I like that you've used the present tense- reminiscent of the Hunger Games intro where Katniss refers to everything in the present. Like that Draco's a brat to her. Keep up the writing!! Report Review
OHMYGOD what does Hermione find? I'm dying to know :) Keep writing!Author's Response: thanks for reading! next chapter will be out soon Report Review
Aw! I love it ull b seein me often. ; )Author's Response: thats great!! i hope you enjoy reading further! Report Review
Wow, this story really has me intrigued! I can't wait to read the next chapter... could you leave me a cliffhanger next time?Author's Response: Yea of course!! thank you for reading!! i will try to get it up by april 5th!! Report Review
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