aw that's really sweet of sirius Report Review
AWWW REMUS IS SO SWEETAuthor's Response: Thanks!! Yeah, I think of him as a real softy. :)
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CUTE CUTE CUTE! Some tiny flaws in the writing but they mean nothing, the story is still wonderful and sweet :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you keep reading. Thanks for the review. xxx Report Review
Ah, I see that you've managed to fix the spacing now. It looks a lot better now but I think you might need to spell check a bit...for example it says 'the bat spoke to Remus' instead of the hat (the sorting hat) so maybe a bit of proof reading and spell checking is needed. Aside from that, great ideas! Keep writing! :) Can't wait for more.Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I appreciate how you tell me what's wrong or stuff I should fix. A lot of the times it's just "Good story," so I like yours better. Thanks again! xxx Report Review
It looks like its heading in a good direction!
Keep it up :DAuthor's Response: Dude your reviews are so nice. Thanks Concave xxx Report Review
hey i really like this first chapter cant wait to read more. i am wondering wheather ur going 2 mention or do a chapter about remus gettting bitten by greyback considering its a life changing event 4 remus. cant wait for the next chapter. i like the piont of view from the parents.
~potterhead42Author's Response: Aww, thanks(:
And yes! I have written a chapter were he gets bitten... Should be chapter three if i remember correctly. Thanks for the review! xxx Report Review
Interesting start. :) Can't wait for more posts! But perhaps you want to fix up the spacing because it look's a little funky right now, or perhaps it's just my computer?Author's Response: Thanks! And it's probably NOT your computer. I write my stories on Microsoft first, and then copy/paste. I'm trying to fix the spacing when I transfer it over, so hopefully it'll get prettier. Thanks again for the review! Report Review
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