Reading Reviews for POTTER meets DURSLEY
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Review #1, by lynlyn121 The Encounter

23rd November 2012:
ok. no offence, just giving some constructive criticism here, but i think you should make some things past tense. like at the bottom of the second chapter. instead of saying "she never knew of the fact that harry and dudley ARE cousins!" i think you should say " she never knew of the fact that harry and dudley WERE cousins." it might make more sense in your mind to use ARE, but i think that WERE sounds better. so i think you should just use more past tense words but other then that, good job!!! :)

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Review #2, by Anonymous The Advertisement

22nd April 2012:
He He, This is quite the twist on things, I have been thinking along the lines of this!

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Review #3, by HarryPotterGeek The Advertisement

1st April 2012:
I think you should extend it. Cool story!

Author's Response: thank u so feels really good to get good reviews.the next chap is in for validation and it will be there in a day so plzz read it and give ur reviews for it also.:)

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Review #4, by kri The Advertisement

1st April 2012:
Good story... I WANT MORE :D

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Review #5, by CF The Advertisement

31st March 2012:
Where's the next chapter? I want to know what happens next! :)

Author's Response: its half complete and it'll be there by tommorow..:)

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