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Review #1, by RavenclawWayToBe Weak

31st March 2012:
Awww! That was such a good ending!!! I thought this had the perfect amount of teenage romance, but it wasn't like, OH MY GOSH, I JUST MET HIM FIVE MINUTES AGO AND I TOTALLY KNOW WE ARE GOING TO BE FOREVER TOGETHER JUST BECAUSE HE LOOKED AT ME, because that really bothers me, but yours showed that there is more emotion underneath that, and it also showed a good perspective from a slytherin (in my opinion). I liked your original character, she was unique and i think you wrote her very well. This story was great, keep writing!
xoxo
RavenclawWayToBe

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I too hate that WE'RE MADE FOR EACH OTHER BECAUSE blah blah blah... stuff, I just can't write it, it's so unrealistic. I'm really glad you liked it.

Loyal HP fan
-Luvshunforever


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