I thought this was cute and funny! I loved how you first describe Ron as a beast, it set the story up for the more funny aspects of it nicely, I thought. I felt so bad for Scorpius and Rose, first they get chased out of the house basically, then he uses the wrong words when speaking to her dad, and then they have to run out of the house in order to be together. The ending though was super sweet. I loved picturing them sitting somewhere in a field together just wrapped up in each other and not really worrying about what just went on with her family, instead looking ahead and knowing that they still have a ways to go. I think that some more description would have been nice, to describe the house, them, or the field would have added, though they aren't absolutley needed it would just give the readers more of an idea of whats going on around them. Overall, a great read and very enjoyable! Great Job!
~Slytherinchica08~ Report Review
Fluffy fluff fluff! I was seaching the archives for something cute and fluffy - thank goodness I came across this! I was giggling reading this. I think you captured Ron well, he was a bit dramatic, but canon Ronald is too. This was really sweet and I liked it a lot. Job well done. Oh, and I adore the chapter image. You draw that? I've never seen a drawing chapter image before, but this was original and perfect. Great job, I hope you keep writing. (: Report Review
This story is incredibly cute and I really enjoyed it. I love how you ended it too. I wish there was more to it is the only thing. I got the end and wanted more. There were some areas where you could've added some detail and it would've been that much better but this was very good! Loved it. Report Review
...I don't think Scorpius should patronize himself as a pureblood. Report Review
Hahaha that was so cute ^^Author's Response: Thank you! :) I am glad you liked it.
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