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Review #1, by VioletBlade Orange Blossom

3rd April 2012:
Hi! I am so sorry this review is late-- I really did want to review it but time got away from me and I've been at work all day! Anyway, I loved this! (: It was so cute and I'm so excited to see how all this works out!

I really like how you've put Audrey working in a flower shop and how she knows so much about the different flowers and how she's like don't you dare pick red roses! :P That was really funny!

I didn't really understand why her best friend had a problem with him being a Weasley, but other than that everything made perfect sense! :) I'll be looking for updates! (You're right, Ariellem does do great work with this pairing ;))



Author's Response: Hey! Don't worry about the wait- you got around to it in the end :) Thank you!
I always imagined Audrey as a dreamer and I've had a recent obsession with flowers so it only seemed fitting that she owned a flower shop. There are so many better flowers out there then red roses! haha

Yeah, I think I'm going to expand more on Zooey in the next chapter. Thank you and yes she does!


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Review #2, by Siriusly3 Orange Blossom

3rd April 2012:
Oh that's so cuute, I feel bad for Audrey though. Stupid Percy proposing to stupid Penelope. Is Zooey a muggle by the way? It's obviously a muggle flower shop right?
Anyway, I loved the bit where she helped him with the money, aww and the fellytone bit :) It flows nicely and I didn't see any mistakes so yeah, great storY! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, so do I (but i promise the endgame is Percy&Audrey haha) Yeah it's a muggle flower shop and Zooey's a muggle (I think I'll either have to re-edit or just add more in the next chapter because I'm confusing a lot of people with who's muggle and who's not)
Yay for no mistakes!

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Review #3, by Avanell 2 Orange Blossom

31st March 2012:
Very cute beginning, can't wait to read what happens!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #4, by Siriusgirl Orange Blossom

29th March 2012:
Loved this short story! Great job on it. I'd love to know more about Audrey and Percy. I have a Percy/Audrey fic too but I'm going to elaborate on it.

Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be sure to read your Percy&Audrey one-shot one day!
Thank you

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Review #5, by Owlpost68 Orange Blossom

29th March 2012:
:D I love this pairing and I love how you're doing it too! I am slightly confused if she's a muggle or not though, 'cause she asked for Pounds instead of Galleons. She also asked for a telephone number, so that's just making me a little confused. Maybe you're waiting til a little later to clear that up, which is fine :)
aww I kinda wished this would be a little longer : /
oh well, I'll enjoy it while it lasts :)
so here's you first review (and first fav I think)
update soon :D

Author's Response: Thank you! The amazing Ariellem showed me this shipping and I haven't really turned away from it haha. Yeah, I think I may go through again and either re-edit or just add more in the next chapter (haven't decided yet) haha
Thank you! And yay for first fav!

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