This was fantastic!
I loved the fact that Victoire and Fred were late for the train because they were shopping, and that they had to be saved by Teddy.
I love the idea of Victoire and Fred being friends, or best friends. I have never seen that before and I must say that it's a nice change.
I love the fact that Teddy has pictures of Victoire and that they were flirting, there's definate love right there :D
It would be great if you did expand this into more chapters, it would be great to see what they all get up to, and how they're going to explain not being on the train, or how they would sneak into Hogwarts without being seen.
This was brilliant and was such a lovely read, I really enjoyed it.Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I am thinking that I might expand this a bit - not necessarily the Hogwarts Express story, but maybe more about some of the other tricks and pranks they get up to that year. :P I'm glad you liked it - thank you for your review! Report Review
Hi! I just wanted to say that I have read almost all of your fics and absolutely love them! You are by far my favorite fanfic author. If you can find time I really think that you should continue this fic, these are some of my favorite characters. Keep on writing!Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :) I'm not entirely sure I will, but I'm in the middle of a one-shot about Vic and Fred's Halloween antics, if you want to check back for that in early/mid October!
Thank you so much for the review! Report Review
Adorable. Please write more things about Teddy and V--they are my favorite couple. Also, I love Freddy and the hijinks he and V can get into :)Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you liked this!
I actually have quite a lot written about them - I'm not sure if you've seen it or not. There's Fish Out of Water, Fortune Favours the Bold, Cloud Nine, The Dark Side of the Moon, and In a Brown Study. I'm definitely planning to revisit them at some point as well - they're one of my favourite couples too! :) Report Review
Too funny that they missed the train! Flooing to the Hogsmeade shop is a good idea. I am curious to see what plans Teddy has for them. Nice start!Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'll have the second part up soon... I keep getting distracted by Curiosity, which I hope isn't too disappointing to you. ;)
Thank you again! Report Review
Very well written.Waiting for the next xhapterAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
I thought this was a fun and entertaining chapter. I love Victorie and Fred together as cousins. I think they bring a lot to any story. I also really like Teddy. He's like the wise mentor of the next generation, but a do gooder all the same.
I liked all of your descriptivness. It really helped paint a wonderful picture of the story that you were trying to tell. It also flowed well and I didn't see any messy transitions.
I really liked it when Victorie asked Fred "Who sets their watch slow?" It sounds like a very Fred thing to do and a very Victorie thing to say.
Overall, I thought it was great and I really enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the great work! =)
-SR17Author's Response: Hey! I'm so sorry that it's taken me so long to answer this - I got a little busy and backed up with reviews, but I've been trying to chip away at them.
I'm really glad you liked this, and felt that it flowed smoothly. You know how new stories are - you can sometimes get a bit insecure. :P
Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it. :) Report Review
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection