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Review #1, by Al

6th April 2012:

Ginny and Luna are in different houses. There's no way that they would have had the same bedroom.

Author's Response: I know. Thanks for the review anyway.

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Review #2, by Mysterious

Missing you

6th April 2012:

This is really good! I loved the bit about Neville being a leader! But Luna and Ginny were in separate houses, meaning that they could have shared a dorm:)

Author's Response: I know! I completely forgot! :D Thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by Liliain

Missing you

6th April 2012:

Interesting... Wow, I sounded just like Snape.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D

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Review #4, by Uganda_my_name

Missing you

6th April 2012:

It's a sweet chapter, I have to admit, though if Ginny was laying on her bed in the Gryffindor girl's dormitories, then why would Luna be there? She's a Ravenclaw... but I like the way you portrayed Neville in this chapter. I've been struggling and tossing around ideas about how to characterize him, and this story has given me a good idea. If you enjoy it, keep writing! And thanks for reveiwing on my story... new chapter's up.

Author's Response: Yeah, I forgot that Luna was in Ravenclaw but I already posted it so just pretend it's another girl and thanks for the review!

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