Good chapter. Your'e moving the story along well. MNFAuthor's Response: Thanks so very much! I know I have been slacking a little bit but it has been a busy week and my sister's birthday was on Sunday but I am going to post my next chapter tomorrow and maybe start another story ... probably another Sirius one or maybe and Hermione and Draco I am not sure yet ... Thanks so much for reading my story and I am glad that you like it so far Report Review
Ah, the plot thickens. The conversation with Harry at the beginning is very telling. There are some errors with the Black family tree, you might want to look it up. Otherwise, an interesting read as always.
MNFAuthor's Response: I know that some things are wrong but I am not sure that I want to change it because then I feel that it might mess up the way that I have wrote the story ... that is why I haven't changed anything about how it has been written ... I hope you can overlook this :) Thanks for your great reviews! Report Review
Ouch! They've certainly got the love/hate thing going. The macking on the French dude at the end was really rude! MNFAuthor's Response: Yeah he gets a little mean sometimes ... but I hope that the story makes you like it! I worked hard on this story! I hope that you like it as much as I did writing it! Report Review
Good chapter. The story is moving forward nicely. I'm anxious to see what happens. MNFAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words! I hope you like this story and that you enjoy it as much as I did writing it! I am hoping to add another story soon! I hope that you will review it when you have the time! Report Review
Interesting. Aurelie looks to be a unique character. MnfAuthor's Response: I hope she is. She is a pretty important character! I hope this story really interests you :) I am posting the next chapter tonight :) Can;t wait to hear your response :) Report Review
Another strong chapter. I'm anxious to see who 'she' is. MNFAuthor's Response: Thanks. I am very excited about this story it is one of my best ones yet! I won't be commenting on your ones on FF(dot)com for a bit because I don't want to get distracted from this one.
I hope you like this story and that you continue to read it! I cannot wait for you to post your next chapter!
Good start. Great characterizations.
MNFAuthor's Response: thanks so much! I hope that this one goes well ... and that people really like it. I have quite a few stories to share, but I don't want to put them all up just yet, I am going to try with these and see how they work out! ... I really hope you like them and don't be too nice in your reviews I can take harsh stuff too if it need be. Report Review
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