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Review #1, by ginnypotter242 The Wedding

1st March 2014:
Aww, that was such a sweet story! I loved how Harry and Ginny were telling it to their kids, instead of the story just being the wedding itself. It definitely added in some character to the story. And the kids were just adorable! Their reactions were priceless- Harry and Ginny kissing, Ginny getting cold feet- they were the sweetest.

The wedding was great too. I loved Victoire running out of flowers halfway down the aisle. And Harry's impatience to see Ginny was great- though if he had rushed the wedding ceremony, I think Mrs. Weasley would kill him. The ending was great too-I loved seeing Harry and Ginny later in life.

The only thing I could say would to be watch excessive description. I loved the description of the dress and what Ginny looked like, but maybe try spreading it out so it's not all in one paragraph. Anyways, great job on the story!

~Sara (For Gryffindor vs Slytherin Blackout Battle)

Author's Response: Thanks so much :) Your review was so great and I'm so glad you liked it. And as for my descriptions, I agree now that I look back on it. I'll fix it as soon as I can.

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