Hello! Thanks for entering my challenge! :)
This was a good entry! :) I liked how you showed what a few others saw as well as just Hagrid. :) I thought that was a nice addition. I also liked the detail you put in to the parts that were Hagrids also. :3
The part when Hagrid says “This 's no' real,” made me so sad! :( It was a great line though!
I also loved how the Mirror felt alone when there wasn't anyone there and how you told it from the Mirror's perspective! :)
My only CC is that in some places you've missed out words in the sentences and it confused me a little though I understood what you were trying to say. :)
Apart from that, great chapter! Well done! :) Thank you for entering, the results for the challenge will be up fairly soon! :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it! I noticed the missing words and I wanted to put it in the queue for corrections, but I have other challenges that need to be accepted first :(. Thanks for reading and reviewing though! :D Report Review
I loved your take on the Mirror of Ersid. It sounds to me like it is lonely and only wants to talk and show people what they want to see.
I think I loved the bit with Hagrid the best, for he was the one who got what his heart desired and wished for.
An excellent one shot and 10/10.Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for coming over to read it. :) I was a little worried about this one since I sort of pulled it up out of no where, but I'm glad it was still a good read. Thanks for the review and the rating! :) Report Review
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