Hello there! I just randomly happened across this in a challenge thread on the forums, and once I started reading... I couldn't stop!
I.absolutely.ADORE.this!! Everything about it is just SO perfect! You managed to keep everyone completely in-character the entire time, and the flow was absolutely amazing. I mean really, this is just TOO precious!
Your description is AMAZING! And this just fits so perfectly with the original series; I would easily believe this to exactly what happened when little Rose was born! It's like a 'missing moment' from the series!
Ron was so sweet throughout the entire thing, and I loved when he smiled once he found out it was a girl! And Hermione was just perfect; calm and collected and already a nurturing mother.
I really, really can not express to you how much I love this! An excellent story and definitely one of my favorites - one of the best I've ever read! (Which is why it's now IN my favorites! :D ) 10/10!Author's Response: I am officially speechless. Seriously, I've been sitting here for several minutes just staring at your wonderful words. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Sincerely.
I am so honoured to have been favourited by you and I am so, so glad you liked my story. I have to admit, I was quite pleased myself with how sweet and gentle Ron and Hermione turned out, but you have no idea how wonderful it is to hear other people like it, too.
Thank you, again. You have just made my day. I love you. I adore you. You have made me an emotional mess and I salute you for it. Report Review
The last few lines of your story are also descriptive of the story itself...it's perfect :)
Great job, I really enjoyed reading this because it was so obvious how much Ron and Hermione love each other. You should definitely keep writing about these two!Author's Response: I'm a true Ron/Hermione shipper, I'll admit! I can enjoy the occasional Dramione (well, not so much these days, but I used to), but there's no denying those to are meant to end up together. It's been so obvious from the start!
I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you so much for your review! :) Report Review
Very cute! Loved it! Keep up with the great work!Author's Response: *like* :D
It was cute, right? Who could resist baby Rose?!
Thanks for the lovely review. :)
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