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Review #1, by Liliths16 GALTAKERS

11th June 2012:
I'm really liking your story so far!
its seems really interesting!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the cute review :)

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Review #2, by cheesecauldron James Potter you say?

7th April 2012:
I mean this only as constructive criticism, but I think you would get more readers if you fixed the spelling mistakes in your intro. There are many in the text as well, and perhaps (only in my opinion) if the story was easier to read, you could gain more dedicated readers. Keep writing though, and don't worry too much about what I said, grammar isn't even close to everything. (Grammar isn't really my strongpoint as a writer either, and not many people are good at it anyways..)

Author's Response: I am a horrible speller!
but yeah I see what you mean!
I went over most of it
Thank you for the review :)


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