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Review #1, by Pretense Of Perfection Falling

9th July 2014:
Back again!!

I really liked this prequel, and I think it offers your readers some invaluable insight to Dorcas' life before her relationship with Sirius. I feel so bad for her, what wth her sister dying and her feeling so lost. I think the way they got together was very sweet, although her dependency on him to save her and make her happy may have been where the trouble in their relationship started. She seems like a typical teenage girl, and I imagine her neediness and clingyness would probably push him away, and given how broken she feels I imagine this could be exactly what happened. I think you did a beautiful job tying this together with its sequel, and the two flow together quite nicely. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors, which is of course a good thing. The plot and pace move along quickly, and keep your readers interested and invested in the characters. I think you chose a very fitting title this time as well, and it fits nicely with the story/series as a whole. I can't wait to read the third part.

---house cup 2014 review---
pretense of perfection, gryffindor

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Review #2, by Espresso Patronum Falling

20th June 2012:
I think this is a really sweet romance story, good job! I like how you didn't reveal who Sirius was in the beginning. Good work :)

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