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Review #1, by skye Fairy Tales

15th April 2014:
OMG i have been waiting for this for ages!! Please update ASAP! thaaank you omg this is my favourite story!

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Review #2, by Moony Fairy Tales

14th April 2014:
Aww!!! Fred and Ryan are so amazing together. You're a brilliant writer and I really love this story. Update soon!

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Review #3, by Rose Fairy Tales

14th April 2014:
Aww, Fred and Ryan moments are adorable and crazy.

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Review #4, by potterfan310 Fairy Tales

14th April 2014:
I get really excited when I'm reading this because it's so perfect and I love it and Fryan needs to happen and just asdfghjkl ♥♥

James and Freddie baby shopping is fab, there's bound to be some fun with those two about. Yes James trying to get into pushchairs, he's such a big kid. This is why I love him and Freddie so much. Frames ♥

James, I have no words for him and the assistant. Though I have a feeling Freddie is going to kill him when they get back for embarrassing him.

"Do you know the sex yet?"

"They did it in a bathroom stall," James said.

That is just beautiful, may be in joint winning for my favourite line! James is fab and I want one :)

Bless Freddie, I think shopping with James has made him one hundred times more scared than he already was, poor thing. I really hope that he will be able to get his own back one day if James ever has kids.

Ahh this is why I love George, I think he is by far one the best characterisations of him I have read. He's still got that spark of mischief even as a grown up.

I can't believe Gemma knows it's Freddie's! And Ryan found them! Gemma and Ryan;s friendship is great, I love how she questions about Freddie. Ollie better not put Annie and Freddie together, it's Fryan all the way.

Frames is good, I always need more Frames in my life :D

Ahh Freddie and Ryan on Valentines so going to be soo good, I can't wait to read it :D Loved it!

Soph ♥

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Review #5, by a rollerball Fairy Tales

14th April 2014:
awesome chapter, just wish it was longer :'( please update soon

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Review #6, by Flying mandarin Fairy Tales

13th April 2014:
These chapters get to me so much. Ryan and Fred are just the most bizarre yet very cute couple I've ever met in fiction and in real life (well except for dumbledore/luna which would be some complicated sh*t but still)

I just really want them to be together but on the other hand I like them like they are right now.
Gemma finally figured it out. I would've thought as a Ravenclaw that she would've known earlier but whatever.
No Zonko. Great Chapter.

You are taking a lot of things on, 3 jobs a book and a business?! Well I just hope you keep writing because that valentine's Day chapter sounds like something I'll have to read asap!


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Review #7, by ruby_slippers Thursday

23rd March 2014:
oh my goodness a little girl how flipping exciting!! Fred is gonna me a mess! and his dad ahaha i can't wait!!

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Review #8, by BaconGreaseOnFries Thursday

14th March 2014:
Aw, what a lovely ending. I am so looking forward to chapter 24. :)

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Review #9, by Sofia We Should get a Puppy

8th March 2014:
Arrrghh I cannot stand Ryan. I literally feel like slapping her. Will she get any better? I rly hope so, because she's been acting like an a-hole since the beginning of the story.

Great story so far though!

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Review #10, by Aubreeeey Thursday

1st March 2014:
I think Fred and Ryan are in love. Even though Ryan is a sarcastic introverted biarch who is said to not have many feelings, she secretly feels "something" for Fred. And Fred is already there, already in love with Ryan and we're waiting for Ryan to realise that she too is in love. Can't wait for the remaining chapters leading to the birth, and eventually to Fred and Ryan confessing their love for each other and ending up together (if they don't get together, I will shoot you).

Another great chapter. Can't wait for the rest of the story - update fast! Don't you dare leave us at the most crucial part of the story!

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Review #11, by lana Thursday

1st March 2014:
Omg please update! Please please please I'm addicted to this story! Best story on hpff plleeeaaassee update I am desperate for more! You are such a great writer omg. Team Fryan for life!!

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Review #12, by Rose Thursday

25th February 2014:
aww, a little girl! Im kinda hoping Fred and Ryan end up falling in love but at the same time, i dont. Im very conflicted. Great job so far.

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Review #13, by a rollerball Thursday

24th February 2014:
amazing chapter, was not expecting a girl for some reason. please update soon :)

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Review #14, by potterfan310 Thursday

23rd February 2014:
Bless Freddie for what knowing what she meant.

Brutus the pygmy puff! Oh what a name :p

Nice one Freddie, trying to encourage China to ask Scorpius, maybe he thinks that then he won't be around Roxy so much.

"Ryan Davies was letting me back into her life. It was probably because I was forcing my way in, but I’d take that as a win." - I'd take that as a win too, Freddie, because it means FRYAN! ♥ (well hopefully)

Freddie and Ryan together are just asdfghjkl the banter between them is what makes them, well them. Love it when Freddie plays/annoys her with his inner child, even thought she has a child within her.




Where can I get one? Because he is just fab-ulous.

"We already had the sex and Ryan doesn’t like talking about it," I said.

That is legit my favourite line so far out of all twenty-three chapters, talk about making me laugh until there were tears :D

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! I was partly right about it being a girl but ahhh it's so sweet. Ryan grabbing his hand, that she thinks they're living in a fantasy pretending they're together as a couple.

My emotions are everywhere right now, between Freddie reading a slightly dirty book and putting it in Ryan's bag (Boy, that'll be fun explaining when she finds it to) to finding out that Ryan and Freddie are having a girl.


I'm beyond happy right now :D I cannot wait for the rest of the chapters now, I'm even more excited, probably as excited as Freddie :D

Loved it!

Soph x

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Review #15, by Hope's Mom Thursday

23rd February 2014:
Babies are always miracles no matter which sex they turn out to be. It is fun to see Freddie's excitement about the baby! Thank you for this new chapter!

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Review #16, by DoctorUnderwood Thursday

22nd February 2014:
Another excellent chapter!

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Review #17, by Flying mandarin Thursday

22nd February 2014:
AAAHW, I love this chapter. Fred is getting some ceritude in his life and Ryan is letting him in more and more.
Keep writing!

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Review #18, by hp481516 Thursday

22nd February 2014:
They are having a girl! Awww! This was one of my favorite chapters! I don't know if it was shorter than the others, but it seemed to fly by.

I feel kind of bad for China, but I think I like her. I am curious to see if she will grow to have a bigger role in the story (but hopefully not as a legitimate romantic interest for Freddie because I ship Fred/Ryan too hard for that haha.)

Keep up the great work!

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Review #19, by Anonymous Thursday

21st February 2014:
This story is my fav next gen story closely followed by a tie btw decoding and "off the rails" for second

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Review #20, by ohmymerlin Thursday

21st February 2014:
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So sweet

I nearly cried

Oh my god

I love them so much

This line:

"We already had the sex and Ryan doesn't like talking about it," I said.

made me nearly wet myself.

And the book.

And Freddie.

All of Freddie.

He's just such an adorable human being.

Can I have one?

And Ryan is slowly opening up to him #success

Look what you've made me do. You've made me use hashtags in a review







[softly sobs]

Never mind me I'm just curled in a corner at how sweet these idiots are

Anyway, I loved this chapter. I'm sorry for the terrible review but my brain is seriously like fgyvbdsgvhvdikbvbhdvbfxhvhfj

I can't wait to read all of this story. I just want to see how everything pans out. I just can't gfkbfhkghKGHFHKBKFK

592596376847027926924986741/10 ;)

- Kayla :)

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Review #21, by Daniele Rings of Smoke

21st February 2014:
“Peer pressure doesn’t taste good, Freddo.” i am using this in my life now just so you know.

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Review #22, by newgenerationlover Thursday

20th February 2014:
Love, love, love this chapter. Can't wait to read on!

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Review #23, by Spyci Thursday

20th February 2014:
Fantastic, as would be expected from the likes of you.

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Review #24, by tre Thanks. Or Whatever.

31st January 2014:
Aww, its sweet he feels so protective of her. Love this story keep up the awesome work

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Review #25, by Javery fannn Thanks. Or Whatever.

27th January 2014:
'The one where you find out'.

God, the cliffhanger in the author's note is worse than the one in the actual chapter.


I was tempted to just end my review there, but you deserve to hear what a great chapter this was. Somehow you manage to keep this exciting at all times, with enough surprises to keep it alive and enough subjects resurfacing to keep us HOOKED.

I'm such an addict. But then again... aren't we all ;)

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