THAT WAS PHENOMENAL. You captured Draco perfectly, because deep down, he really isn't a bad person, and is so torn about what he should do, and which side he should choose, because it can change more than just his life. Really, you had me braced for something terrible to happen, which is a good thing, because you had me hooked from line one! The end just killed me. That last line... Pure genius. The grammar was a million times better than when you first started writing, and you should be proud of your improvement. I just loved this story! Write another one like this! Also, the first chapter of The Fourth Daughter is up, do check it out if you want. This really was so emotional and intense and amazing. AH I love it. 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: THANK YOU! I have never done a one-shot before and i'm so glad it was ok! I never thought Draco was really a bad person so i thought up this idea. I wanted voldemort to be like "Meh, go on Draco go home." But he would never say that as much as i wanted him to :) I've been practicing my grammer and proof reading more so i am so gald it's improved thank you so much for helping me!!! I will write another one i think, i have a few idea's :) I will read it now. The title is really intriguing me! Thank you so much!!! I look forward to your reviews so much, they mean so much and are always helpful!

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