Creepy. I like it... I wanna know more. Keep on writing Report Review
I really like Lily's point of view, and I hope we get more of it! I love the fact she had to do that to find out, and how Echo cast the spell so Lily can't tell anyone? That's really good.
Looking forward to the next chapter, update soon! Report Review
this is really good: i love how you show the voice in her head.
i'm looking forward to finding out what the 'secret' is, and what happened with her mum and dad, UPDATE SOON! Report Review
I really like this story. The characters are really in depth and I can easily relate to many of them. Two of my absolutely best friends have been where echo is and this story makes me realise how much I care for them. I feel very empathetic toward the characters and I love the issues you have made the story deal with. Good job and keep going. Good luck with our writing endevours :D Report Review
i like this, which i suppose could be classed as strange, since it's kind of depressing. but, it's really good, and i want to know why she is like she is, you know? can't wait for the next chapter, UPDATE SOON! Report Review
I thought this was really good :) Report Review
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