This story is awesome! I love Anna, and I think her being related to Scorpious will make this story fun. Marie is brilliant. I can't wait to look into her relationships with James, Alan, Scorpious, Fred and Dom more, and want to see what they're like as characters. I think this story is really funny =) I really like Anna, and I think there's a lot more to know about her - why she doesn't like her dad, what she looks like, what she likes and doesn't like (I'm guessing (HOPING) she's a fan of penguins =D) and like I said before, her relationships with people. She's got a great personality and she's a lot of fun. Great story so far, and I'm looking forward to the next update =) xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much =) (Honestly, I didn't think anyone was reading until I read this.. Like a month later) I'm glad you like it, because my goal is to have people like my stories without having to change my characters. Um, I'll probably be explaining a lot of things in the next few chapter and then it'll move along much faster. Thanks so much for reviewing, really made my day!

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I REALLY like this story! It looks like it's gonna be tons of fun and I can't wait to find out more about the characters. I love the fact that they were talking about penguins, and the part where James jumps down the stairs is brilliant xx I'm just gunna read the next chapter now ^ ^ Great chapter and brilliant chapter title =) xx

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