Reading Reviews for The Gray Lady
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Review #1, by Romilda The Party

25th July 2012:
Interesting, i like that version

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Review #2, by Scribbly Doodle The Party

27th April 2012:
Veeery nice!
I like it a LOT!
I especially like the humanness of her feelings as she takes the diadem.
If this is a pure canon fic or you mean it to be - can I point out one thing?
Helena may be a rebel - but she is wily, not necessarily 'heat of the moment' and, maybe here she's a bit too outraged, but perhaps she should be a bit cooler and less emotional when handling herself?
Just a thought.
Of course she could be un-canon and then completely your character! So no issues there!
I like the Baron already - his character I mean. I sense depths even Helena doesn't know. :)
Keep updating!

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