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Review #1, by darkkid On

20th July 2015:
Slytherin House Cup 2015

Oh how cute. I really like that Remus is free from lycanthropy. He deserves it.

Harry and Teddy are actually quite adorable together. It saddens me that Harry lost most of his "parent" figures but he clearly doesn't need them anymore. He became quite the parent himself at such a young age. Though it makes sense seeing as everything he had went through.

And the reactions from Remus and Tonks. Tonks especially, she nearly brought me to tears. I love it. I love that they get to see him from the afterlife and watch over him. It's perfect and bittersweet.

Great read!


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Review #2, by Derek Hale On

12th April 2015:
Hello Julie.

I'm Derek Hale. Ehmm... so this is little awkward, but I'm here because I heard you ship something called Sterek? I wasn't really sure what that was, but my friend from the forums (you may have met her, actually) love it too and explained it was a pairing with Stiles and me. I just wanted to let you know that I don't like Stiles. And that little playful violence thing and our constant saving each other, is not at all a sign that we might actually be in love. We don't have a love-hate thing going on. Just love, not hate! Wait, that was wrong. I mean hate, not love. Can we just forget about that?

Anyway, I'm here to review your story. because I needed to see what kind of person you were *cough, cough* if you're clairovayant or something *cough, cough*, since you think Stiles and me should be together, you know.

And I loved the piece. I'm not a touchy-feely guy, but it got me. My friend from the forum is here with me, and she's in tears so you must have done something very right here. No, seriously, I liked it. I lost parents too, you know, and I was young as well. So I can relate to poor Teddy, but it's sweet his parents are watching over him from beyond. I'm not sure if my parents do, but hey... I can deal.

Oh great, Scott is here with that annoying friend of his again. I'm going to have to run... some alpha problem going on over here. But I would just like to make it very clear that I do love Stiles. No, I mean I don't! Ehmm... is there any chance you can forget this ever happened? And perhaps not mention it to Scott?

And say hi to my friend from the forums if you should meet her. She uses some secret name, though, because apparantely there's some kind of alpha after her. I'm sure you'll find out who she anyway.

See ya

Derek Hale

(Oh, and my friend wanted to let you know that she's happy there are someone else that reads way too much gay fanfiction. She does too. She's a little afraid someone will read her internet history, and realise how obsessed she is. I think she's right to be. Who in their sane mind would think Stiles and I are good for each other? I don't like Stiles, and especially not his very nice eyes. God, what is wrong with me today?! )

Author's Response: Oh Derek. Sweet little Derek. Sweet cinnamon roll Derek, too good for this earth and the writers who created you. Sit down. Sit with me and let me tell you a thing.

See, you don't see it now, but that hyperactive human boy that tags along with Scott, he's really important. Even if he's just as sarcastic and mean as you are (precious cinnamon roll Derek, you're kind of grumpy sometimes. Stiles didn't call you a Sourwolf for nothing. it's okay, everyone's fave is problematic. I still love you) But anyway. You guys saving each other's lives, and the prolonged looks (we see it, Derek, let's be real here) and the banter, god the banter, that's the stuff OTP's are made of. I'll explain. OTP=one true pairing. Ask Stiles. he understands the internet better. He'll probably even do that cute little blushing thing that you "totally don't notice" amiright?

I know I am.

Let me go back to that banter for just a second. At first it was sincere, and we could see that you two were maybe a little irritated with each other. But that time you and Scott rescued Boyd and Cora? And Stiles called you a 'big bad wolf' - that wasn't anything but egging each other on because YOU ARE SO CUTE.

And Scott would love it. Okay Derek, because even though you two didn't have a good start, Scott totally loves you and looks up to you now. And there is no one that Scott loves more than Stiles. And Scott knows that - even if Stiles is strong and smart and totally don't need no man to protect him - he knows that you'd protect him with your life anyway. Stiles' dad might be a little wary, but that's just because he loves Stiles so much, just like you do. (You'll win him over after a few months when you bring over those double fudge brownies and tell him they were your mom's recipe. Stiles won't approve of the sugar, but he'll get over it.)

Stiles has some figuring out to do before he gets there, though, so you have to be patient with him. Since I'm letting you in on this little secret and helping you realize how much you love that boy, you have to promise to let him figure it out. He had a little moment where he might have realized some things, but he has to admit it to himself first before he can realize that you're standing right there.

Or lurking. or whatever it is - I mean really, Derek, the lurking is weird. You're... how old even are you?? I don't know. I'm getting off topic. You aren't in high school anymore.

Because see, you see what's right in front of you, but I've read the fanfiction. I know the truth. You guys are gonna get married and have little wolf babies and you're going to have a big old family.. a big old pack again and you and Stiles are going to be safe and be so in love that its gross. Gross and embarrassing and adorable.

To wrap this up, #sterekiseternal.

Also, if you see Lydia, will you tell her that she's my banshee princess and I love her and that'd I'd be totally okay if she walked all over me in high heels.

Well, maybe just that I love her.

Love, Julie.

P.S. - I'm glad you liked the story!

P.S.S. - tell your friend I share her pain with the internet history, and should she feel the need to cry about you and Stiles' true love, she knows where to find me.

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Review #3, by Helga Hufflepuff On

8th March 2015:
Hello dear!

Tonks is such a lovely girl. She was in my house you know!

I must say I am quite intrigued as to whether Tonks and Remus are actually there or not as semi-visible ghosts, or really not. At first I thought this story was AU because the two were still alive, but then I wondered why they lost their lovable faults...

Harry seems to be a such a lovely father to the boy! I enjoyed his way of encouraging him that his parents love him even though he never knew them; something Harry can relate to quite well. I liked the way Teddy fixed his hair just a little, and that it helped him make his first friend and that Harry encouraged Teddy to be himself.

This was a very sweet story! I loved seeing Teddy starting his first day through the eyes of his unseen(?) deceased parents.


Author's Response: Helga!

Tonks was in the best house :D

Sad to say, they are not ghosts and not visible.

I have to think that Harry would take over the guardianship roll (along with Andromeda) after Remus and Tonks' deaths. I just don't think there's any way that Harry would ever want Teddy to feel like he wasn't 100% loved and cared for.

Thank you so much, Miss Helga! And thank you for creating the best house at Hogwarts :D


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Review #4, by lightthecandle On

1st January 2015:
Hot Seat; Round Two!

The beginning was adorable and I found it really relieving (for some weird reason) that Remus didn't have his lycanthropy anymore. It was sort of a reward for having to deal with it for so long and it was good to see them happy.

Also - along with Fred, Sirius, James and Lily - I bawled when Tonks and Remus died because I thought Harry would at least have some sort of parental figures who were close to his real parents. But no, JK had to be heartless and kill them off!

Anyway, the interactions between Harry and Teddy were the perfect example of Harry not really needing that figure in his life because he did such a good job of being a father for Teddy. I think that would have something to do with the fact that they are both in the same boat.

And Teddy showing off his metamorphmagus powers leading to Nymphadora crying was just so bittersweet and I wouldn't doubt that she was thinking about when she used to do the same with her friends.

This was such a cute one-shot that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. So thank you so much.

~Aimee xxx

Author's Response: Hey Aimee!

When I wrote this I definitely thought about all of the things that Remus didn't like about himself and got rid of them in this sort of afterlife place.


I really think that Harry would take the godfather approach towards Teddy so seriously, and make sure that Teddy knew he was constantly loved and cared for after his parents' death.

Aw, I didn't even think of that! I bet she totally did! AH.

Thank you so much for the lovely review, Aimee! (I'm super excited to read the next chapter of The Rejects, also!)


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Review #5, by Secret Santa On

31st December 2014:
Hey Julie!

I was quite excited about reading some of your older stories! And this one is about Remus, who I know is your favourite character, so I was even more excited.

I just realised that Teddy and James naming their daughter Dora in Nine and a Half might be connected to Teddy's mother! This didn't even occur to me when I was reading that story - and I call myself a Tonks fan! Anyway, that introduction, with Remus and Tonks waking up, was very sweet. And it took me a moment to figure out what was going on because at first I thought this was an AU. But I liked it even more when I realised it was a story about the afterlife, because I love that theme (I have written about it in 50% of my fics, which is not as much if you know just how little stories I have posted :P). Also, I loved the detail you included, about how Remus doesn't miss his lycantrophy in the slightest.

''She had her feet pinned closely together, and leaning forward slightly, she gave him a small frown.'' - This was such a lovely sentence! I love detailed descriptions of the way people stand, or move, or hold themselves - it gives such nice mental images. And the paragraph that follows, with them shifting from one place to another with their clothes brushing in the street - that was so beautifully written.

The conversation between Harry and Teddy was so sweet, and then the way Tonks reacts to her son and everything he does. This entire story is so sad in such an unimposing, non-melodramatic way. I could go into deep analysis of it but I just can't because it would ruin the wonderfully melancholy feeling I am experiencing right now.

So, thank you for writing this - I am so happy I had the chance to read it. I'm sorry for the incoherent review, halfway through reading my brain turned into mush, which usually happens when I read something that truly moves me.

I do hope you will produce some more Tonks/Remus fics in the future because I know I would love reading them!

Have a great new year, dear!


And this review deserves all of the amazing 'glad' synonyms that I can't figure out right now, but I totally will. One day.

Yes, it is a definite head-canon of mine that Teddy/spouse would name their kids after Remus and Tonks. Of course in the dream head-canon that spouse is James :D

And the idealistic world would really be important for me. Actually I'd really love for Remus to be alive and learn to love and accept his lycanthrophy with Tonks' help, but SOME CRAZY AUTHOR HAD TO GO KILL MY FAVORITE CHARACTER.


Aw, I love the analysis either way! I'm really glad that you liked this, Andy! (not santa..)

Maybe maybe! Though god only knows I don't need another WIP slowing me down :p

Thank you so much, dear! You were a fantastic secret santa!


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Review #6, by padmoonyfoot7 On

6th September 2012:
Oh my Godric, I am just like crying. Well trying to hold it in, because I'm in the sitting room and my family would think that somethings wrong. But nothing is because this story is amazing and written beautifully.
I love the way Tonks reacted to everything Teddy did and how Remus looked to her all the time to see her reaction and then smile.
I loved how Harry kind of knew that they were there, like he could feel them there. He is a really great godfather, and really supportive of Teddy.

Teddy was really cute and really like Remus and Tonks. The way when the boy ran up and said that he was cool, he sort of got more confident and made a friend, was just really amazing.
I just super loved - like the highlight of the story - when Teddy saw Remus and Tonks, just for a moment, and his brow furrowed, though then they dissappeared. Hopefully they pop in at other times in his life and he sees them then too.

Keep up the amazing work!!


Author's Response: Oh no! Don't cry! *hands tissue* Oh. I completely understand. I get a few - okay, a lot - of crazy looks when I laugh or get all emotional reading fanfiticon :p

I just love Remus and Tonks so dearly and I was so sad when they died in the books that I really wanted to make everything happy for them on Teddy's special day :)

I think he knew! He just had to have known they're always there for him no matter what!

Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm so glad you like it! :)

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Review #7, by Emily On

25th August 2012:
Oh my God I'm crying so much I hate you no not really I love you I'm just dying What is air OMG I'm so sad thankyou for writing this it's beautiful

Author's Response: Aw, don't cry! *hands tissue* Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #8, by Darla On

1st August 2012:
I want you to understand how much I love this One-shot. It moved me to tears. I honestly have nothing else to say other than this was absolute beauty.

Author's Response: Thank you so much♥ I really love how this story turned out too! I'm glad you loved it!

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Review #9, by I_trusted_Snape13 On

20th July 2012:
asdfgjkl; I'm like sobbing now! This was completely, totally, one hundred percent, rivetingly beautiful. Remus/Tonks was always my favorite ship and this completely did them justice. I loved how they were with him, but not. And that they got to see him off for his first day at Hogwarts. Teddy was adorable and Harry took his role as Godfather and handled the situation perfectly. I just loved every word. Teddy making him friend was so cute and I loved how Remus could not be scarred and feel aged and how Tonks could move freely...gah, I just adored this. You deserve so much higher than a 10/10. Brilliant job!

Author's Response: aw, *hugs* don't cry!

I'm sort of speechless at how to thank you enough for this! I'm so happy you loved it, espeically as a Remus/Tonks shipper! They're my favorite too.

Harry was so fun to write as a godfather! Again, thank you so much for your kindness, it means so much to me! I'm so happy you liked this!

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Review #10, by Elenia On

18th July 2012:

Wow! I'm in shock! This was so beautiful! I'm all teary-eyed her because of your wonderful one-shot.

Go! Write more stories like this!

Okay, calming down now d:

But seriously this was one of the best one-shot's I've ever read. You deserve every praise word in the world for this.

Remus and Tonks were just perfect, and little Teddy ♥ And Harry! Seriously, I don't even have the words to describe how wonderful and canon everyone was! (Which sort of sucks because I should be leaving you a review here!)

Urgh, I'll go away now, but know that I loved this so, so, so much! Expect a PM once I gain my ability to write reviews again (x

Take care, sweetie!


Author's Response: I DON'T KNOW!

haha :p I'm glad you like this! I was really happy with how this came out so it means a lot to hear you enjoyed it :)

and everyone stayed canon♥ that's so fantastic to hear! I love all of these characters so much and I always worry that I completely mess them up.

Again, thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm so happy to hear your opinions for this♥

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Review #11, by magnolia_magic On

29th June 2012:
Hi Julie! I've heard a few people mention how much they loved this story, so I thought I'd come by and read it for myself. And I'm so glad I did!

Like I said, I've heard nothing but great things about this one-shot, and after reading it I can see that they were all true! This was so sweet, and I love seeing Remus and Tonks happy in the afterlife. Your description of it was just lovely :) And the conversation between Teddy and Harry was great...it's just how I imagine Harry would be as a godfather.

I know this isn't much of a review, but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this! Keep up the great work :)


Author's Response: Hi Maggie!

O.O You've heard people mention this!? I don't even know what to say, I'm kind of in awe.

When I thought of this I really wanted to give Remus and Tonks their ideal afterlife. You know, take all the things that they were insecure about and make eveything perfect for them.

Even though they weren't physically there for Teddy, I wanted to make sure Harry told him how they'd always be in his heart and in their thoughts. I think Harry would just be this awesome godfather!

Thank you so much for this review! It made me smile a lot :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #12, by Roots in Water On

22nd June 2012:
I really liked this one-shot- it's unique and well written. I hadn't given much thought to the possibility of Remus and Tonks watching Teddy from the afterlife, even though I've read many from the perspective of James or Lily.

I must admit that at first I thought this was taking place in an alternate universe but I quickly realized that it was still taking place in the canon universe and I liked the way you used the impossibly fast transitions between locations to help cement this idea.

I loved the interactions between Tonks and Remus- they seemed just like they were in the books. I particularly liked Tonks' nervousness for Teddy's big day- her comment about how she had almost missed her own first day of Hogwarts was so perfectly in character and it certainly had me smiling!

As well, I liked the interaction between Teddy and Harry. I've always thought that Harry played a large role in his upbringing and this certainly seemed to be the case here. The mirroring between what Remus had said to Harry back in his third year and what Harry was now saying to Teddy was very well done and I really liked how Harry managed to describe exactly what his parents were doing. It showed that Harry had known Remus and Tonks really well.
Finally, I liked the hopeful ending you gave to this story. It was nice to see Teddy being accepted and his metamorphagus abilities being recognized as amazing as they actually are. As well, Teddy's eagerness to go off with his friends (or soon-to-be, anyway) but still being worried about his guardian figures was very nicely normal- it definitely showed that, yes, life could go back to normal after a war.

All in all, I think that you did a fantastic job with this story and it was a pleasure to read it.

Author's Response: thank you so much for such a detailed and lovely review! I'm really blown away by your praise for this it really made my day to see this!

You know, I never even thought about those James and Lily stories when I first came up with this, but it does relate, doesn't it? I haven't read too many of them but I may have to look for some :)

I've gotten that reaction a few times. I wanted to make the afterlife their 'perfection' and I think I made it a little too real :p But I'm glad things did make sense eventually!

I'm always a bit nervous I don't capture Remus and Tonks as well as I want to so it's great to hear you think so as well :)

I just see Harry being this fantastic father figure for Teddy, I know exactly what you mean. I was a bit worried that the quote would take away from the flow of the story so it's so fantastic to hear otherwise :)

Again, thank you so much for such a thoughtful and detailed review! I'm really just in awe by this and it's making me smile a lot! Thank you so much!♥

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Review #13, by Lillylover22 On

27th May 2012:
That was beautiful 10/10 : )

Author's Response: aw, thank you dear! I'm glad you liked it :)

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Review #14, by academica On

12th May 2012:
Hey there! I'm here with your requested review :)

I thought this was really sweet, and it's definitely (in my mind) a realistic and heartwarming view of the afterlife. I think Remus and Tonks would definitely want to be there for every milestone as they watched their son grow up, even if they couldn't physically help tie his shoes and assist with his homework. It really touched my heart to watch Remus and Tonks interact, as well as to watch Harry and Teddy together. It's great that Teddy's unique abilities helped him make friends right off the bat instead of alienating him as "weird".

I do think this story might benefit from a read-over by a Quick Beta, especially if you've got a little bit of time before the deadline for the challenge. I noticed a few sentences where the phrasing was awkward, as well as a few technical mistakes sprinkled throughout the piece. It's not a huge problem, and the story was still quite readable for me, but I know how much the little things can count in a challenge, so I figured I'd mention it as something for you to consider.

The only other thing I noticed is that I felt like you referred to Remus by name a lot more than Tonks. While it was plenty clear to me who you meant by 'she', I think it might shift the balance a little if you change some of them to her name.

I loved the ending of this story, with that little hint that Teddy sort of knows his parents are watching over him from afar. I thought you did a great job of characterizing everyone, but Remus and Tonks were my favorites, because I could see little echoes of a long, happy marriage in their interactions. I do think you could have included a little more imagery in the part where they enter the train station, but I think you did a good job of connecting that with the similar scene from canon. Overall, this was a really simple, lovely read for me.

Very nice! I hope this review is helpful :)


Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for such a detailed review!

I'm so happy to hear you thought it was realistic-- (well, as realistic as topics of the afterlife go)- I wanted to make it ideal enough for them, but still retain a good enough sense of their characters.
I would just have to think Harry would embrace parenting and god-parenting in such a great way, growing up without them.

Thanks for mentioning it, I will have to look at the quick beta section. I do have some time before the deadline and I agree with the every little thing counts :)

Do you know what it is with her name for me? As much as this is my favorite ship and I love them, I can't grasp Remus calling her 'Tonks' after they get married, and it just sounds awkward to me with Nymphadora/Dora because she disliked it so much. So I avoided it; when I totally see it now after you mentioned it; it makes it unbalanced. I'll have to take a look at fixing that.

He just has to know how much they love him and will always be there for him! Just has to. Oh, I'm so glad the characters seemed like themselves. I always try to do them justice and give them at least a little happiness whenever I write them.

Thanks so much for this! You've given me a lot of great things to look at in improving this piece; it was extremely helpful :) Thank you!

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Review #15, by TooMuchMagic On

10th May 2012:
This one-shot was short and sweet, just lovely! And how Tonks and Remus wouldn't miss Teddy's first day at Hogwarts, even from the afterlife, was so touching and bittersweet. :') Wonderful writing, thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: aw, thank you!
I'd like to think they wouldn't want to miss it, but then again I just love them a little too much ;) I'm so glad you liked it, thanks so much for reviewing and letting me know!

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Review #16, by Ronsgirl29 On

1st May 2012:
Oh my goodness, I love this oneshot! It was so sad, yet it's reassuring that loved ones can still be with you even when they are gone. I thought it was adorable that you included the same quote Remus once told Harry.

Overall, I just loved every bit of this! Great job

Author's Response: :) Thank you! I was really happy with the way this turned out so hearing someone loved it always makes me so happy.

I think the line 'the ones that love us never really leave us' was sort of the driving point behind writing this, and it's great to hear the emotions I was trying to put into the words came though :)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #17, by ScorpiusRose17 On

1st May 2012:

This is fabulous!

I am just simply amazed by this story! It was so sad, but in such a great way that you really made the emotions of Remus and Tonks come through that I had tears in my eyes just reading this.

I really like how you made them ponder what color hair he would have and that it matched his Mom. I was happy to see a mature Harry stepping up to the fatherly role that had been granted to him by Remus and Tonks.

It was so sweet. I loved Harry and Teddy's interaction. I loved watching Teddy stand his ground and talk to the other boy, making a friend right away. You did a wonderful job capturing the moment. I also thought that it was very moving how Teddy even looked in the direction of where his parents stood.

Your writing is always so inspiring to me. Your descriptions are amazing and you make such a vivid picture that it is so easy to see what you are telling. I love how you love writing your stories. It makes it that much better and that much more believable.

Keep up the superb work! =)


Author's Response: Hey dear, thanks so much for reading this! Aw, *hands tissue* I'm so glad you were able to feel that way about this, it means so much to hear it!

Remus and Tonks are my OTP and I just love writing about them (along with snily, but I could never write it) so to hear all of their emotions and personalities came across in the way I wanted the too means a lot.

HE JUST HAD TO HAVE SEEN THEM! Maybe it was like that moment in the movie where Harry thinks he saw Voldemort in the muggle suit? Because, you know, Voldemort would wear a muggle suit to platform 9 & 3/4... :p Except, this was meaningful. haha.


Your reviews are fantastic, you really are too kind. I love responding to them, even though about 98% of the time they leave me so speechless all I can say is "Thank you thank you!" so, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #18, by Akussa On

30th April 2012:

First thing, I have to say that your banner really caught my eye; it's breautiful and after reading this story, it's fitting!

I really enjoyed this short piece. I found it was a wonderful moment and I was so touched that Remus and Tonks fond a way to be near their son on this important day. You captured all the characters perfectly and I especially liked the interactions between the characters. They were believable and sweet.

Great work, it was a touching read and I enjoyed it a lot!

Author's Response: Hi!

I agree, nostalgia did a brilliant job with it, it was exactly what I was imagining. (but i'm awful at any sort of graphics so I could never make something so fantastic)

When I wrote this I kept thinking about the line 'the ones that love us never really leave us' (the summary) and I would just have to think at an important moment like this Remus and Tonks would want to be there for Teddy.

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #19, by Siriusly3 On

30th April 2012:
Wow, I read this before but I don't think I reviewed. WHY, this made me shiver and cry and it's just lovely. It's so sad and so beautiful, when Teddy says 'I wish they were here,' I just love this, (if I reviewed before this will be AWKWARD) it's wonderful writing and a lovwly idea, good luck with your challenge!!

Author's Response: god, thank you! *scrolls down* I don't think you reviewed before, you're good!

But thank you! Really, this is so nice of you♥! I'm glad I was able to get the feelings across to you that I was trying to acheive! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #20, by EvannaBlackthorn On

30th April 2012:
That was a wonderful read, a lovely piece of writing. I really enjoyed it! What I loved the most was how you captured the emotions of the characters. And you made little Teddy sound so cute too! :3

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, I really enjoyed writing it :) Little Teddy was intersting to write since I've never written someone at that age before, so I'm happy he came off sounding well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #21, by AndrinaBlack On

26th April 2012:
Hi! Firstly I have to tell you that I found my way to your page to sort of return the favor. You recently reviewed one of my stories, but you also around a month ago reviewed one of my stories without maybe knowing it. Yeah, I don't know how much you followed everything April Fools related on the forums, but some of the staff had alternate accounts and LittlePaddocks630pm (with one T on the forums :P) was me. For fun and a bit more believability I wrote a story for the account too. So this is my little thanks, because I feel almost like I've cheated a review from you.

And to the actual story... I really liked this piece. It's beautiful and sweet and sad at the same time. And it's an interesting concept. First I thought it was really AU with them having survived the war, then I thought they had survived, but were hiding for some reason and maybe acting to the rest of the world as some other relations to Teddy. But then in the end when Harry and Teddy were talking I realised that they weren't alive after all. That's somehow beautifully symbolic or something, with Harry telling him that they are in his heart and then they are there beside them, but sort of in his heart.

The only little critique I have is that, I don't think Andromeda would want to miss Teddy's first day either. She was the one raising him after all (at least I seem to remember that that's been confirmed). But I liked Harry being there too. Your writing flows well and looks to me at least gramatically correct and didn't spot any typos or anything else like that either, so it was easy and pleasurable to read. You did a good job with this! :)

Author's Response: Hi!

Weren't you the one who was posting about your story being rejected by Voldemort for not having enough awkward Draco hugs? Well, you fooled me. I saw a few posts about how big April Fools day was around here so I was expecting something, but I didn't realize to watch for alters! It was a lot of fun though, you guys did a great job with it.

how about an acutal response! :)

That bittersweet mood was really what I was going for so I'm happy it came across that way. I kept thinking about the line 'the ones that love us never really leave us' and that's kind of how this all came to be. That and I just love Remus and Tonks :)

As far as Andromena I completely see where you are coming from. I didn't write her in because I wanted to really give Harry the moment to pass on 'they'll always be with you', and I think it would have taken away from the moment. I'd like to think she got him all ready and Harry drove or something.

Thank you so much for coming to review! Your writing (on both accounts :p) was really fantastic so it's really great to hear you enjoyed my work!

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Review #22, by Dmlong On

24th April 2012:
Aww this was incredible! I'm not gonna lie, it made me tear up a bit. So sweet. Of course Tonks & Remus couldn't miss Teddy's first day. I loved it, great job! :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Don't cry! *hands tissue*

They couldn't! They're such a favorite of mine, so I just love writing them. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #23, by MrsJaydeMalfoy On

18th April 2012:
I LOVE this! It's so sweet and sad at the same time; more sweet than sad, though! I thought your description was absolutely amazing, and the flow was flawless as well! 10/10, and this is going into my favorites!

Author's Response: Thanks! that bittersweet was what I was going for, so I'm glad you thought that came through! It was definatly a neat peice to write. Thanks so much for reading, and letting me know you liked it!

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Review #24, by Maybe On

13th April 2012:
Oh, this was so sweet. I could imagine everything so vividly; I liked how the scenery dissolves around them from their bed to the Muggle street to King's Cross, the idea of Remus and Tonks standing over their son and watching, Teddy changing his hair bubblegum pink like his Mum. I loved that part; how he's just like his parents!

The quote from PoA worked really well too - it's definitely something Harry would say, repeating the words of his own godfather. The little touch at the end of Teddy glancing in their direction was brilliant, I loved it. Great!

Author's Response: aw, thank you so much! I'm happy you liked the idea of it. I'm not even sure how it came to me but I'm really happy with the way the concept turned out. I would have to think, even not knowing them for more than a month of being an infant, Teddy would still pick up on a few traits of his mum and dad.

Oh, good! I was really hesitant about putting the quote in, because I always think they can take away from a story very quickly, but I'm happy to hear it worked! The quote was actually said by Remus (not Sirius) on the bridge, when Harry wasn't allowed in hogsmeade.

I'd like to think Teddy saw them at the end :) Thanks so much for reading, and taking the time to leave a review!

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Review #25, by alicia and anne On

29th March 2012:
I love how you write Remus and Tonks in all of your stories, you make them seem so real and I love it!
You've given me goosebumps from this story it's so sweet, sad and beautiful.
And the ending is amazing! I loved that so much! He totally saw them. I nearly cried!
Loved it! :-D

Author's Response: aw, thanks! I really love them so I always want to write them well. They're one of my favorite ships and I wanted to write the happy ending they deserve :)

I think.. he thinks he saw them. I wish they wouldn't have died! why JKR!?
Thanks for the lovely review!

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