wow. this sounds just amazing!! can't wait to read the rest!Author's Response: Aw thanks so much! I hope you enjoy the rest!!! Report Review
Heey, I'm here now (: and wow, I have to say you surely have an interesting story in your hands here! I'm really, really curious where you're taking this!
I love your writing and all the descriptions you've put here, I think they made this flow really well and kept me captivated through the whole chapter.
I really liked your Draco, he seemed quite like I pictured him to be at that age and I really liked all the arrogance you've managed to put on Tom's character. Great work.
But still, it was the plot that I liked the most. It seems to be so big and complex, I can't wait to see how it all starts to work! This was a great start!
Hopefully I'll get a chance to read more! (:
Thanks again for the swap!
~EleniaAuthor's Response: Aw thanks so much Elenia, (love that penname!) I started this in January, but the idea had been at the back of my mind since last year sometime, I just didn't know how to write it until I had some more ideas a little earlier back.
Oh fantastic, I always struggle with descriptions so I'm glad it seemed realistic.
Yes, I can imagine him at first being like "but Harry Potter is so famous, why would I want to hurt him? He can help me get famous too" or something along those lines, and then switch to "He... does... what?..." and then the hatred comes because he suddenly understands what happens. I hope he was scared enough, I got so into my writing I fear Draco might be a little too confident at the beginning with Tom, might have to go back and change that.
It really is, took me weeks to figure out what was going to happen in the original drafts! Everything hopefully does come together, and I think work in the end.
Thanks v much for the swap too! It was wicked
Rachel Report Review
I think my brain just exploded but, yeah, wow! I think this fic has a lot of creativity and originality. I like that you've taken on such a complex task and I think more people should have the guts to take on such feats. I like how you've slightly changed Draco and the Trio's characterisations to suit the time warp. It's more believable the way that Harry's failures have taken a toll on him and how Draco is less of a coward.
You've got something really interesting going on here and I hope you continue. I look forward to your next update :)Author's Response: I'm not surprised, it's very complicated! Aw thanks moondrifter, I like how you're interested by it and that you thought it took guts to put it up. I spose it did in a way, because most fanfics follow a certain formula. I had to change their characterisations yes but only in the sense that Draco would be too cowardly without the help of the time change to do anything certainly lol and Harry would be braver and more sure of himself if the time thing hadn't changed. Those are the only differences though.
Thanks v much, I was going to take this down but now I've realised it's alright actually, gonna put the next chapter up now for you :) Report Review
I think you captured a young Draco very well, he was all I expected him to be so that's a good thing, I am slightly curious on your idea behind this story, you hold a lot of creativity my friend.
I think I know where your going with this, (She doesn't) and I think that sounds actually interesting, I thought you did an excellent job with this chapter, and I had fun review swapping with you :)
LizzieAuthor's Response: yeeesss! I got Draco in character! **jumps** ; D Thanks, the idea? Um. I'd always liked the idea of Tom Riddle taking Draco Malfoy back to the time before everything began, so that he could have a chance to exact revenge!
hahhah do you? Aw thanks, I'll be sure to review yours later! It looked wicked from what I saw
WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!! Is all I can say! I love this story so much, how do you favourite stories? Sorry. I probably sound stupid. WHY IS NO ONE ELSE REVIEWING THIS EFFING AMAZING FANFIC!?!Author's Response: Wowowowooww! Thank you again :) I'm so happy you like it and don't apologise! hahahah well, I have been around the site since 2006 writing, so maybe people are bored with me :P This IS my like 42nd fanfic. Awww this made me smile so much!!! I'm jumping **literally** ; D Hope you like chapter three just as much, Rachel Report Review
WOW! This is so great!!! PLEASE CONTINUE! I WILL DIE IF YOU DON'T!Author's Response: WOW right back, thank you so much! :) I hope you like the rest, I'll put up the next chapter tomorrow! Report Review
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