This was just wow. It was so emotional and I felt like I was feeling everything you wrote about and that I was really there.
This was great. I love Fred and I can't believe he died :'( Well done though, I loved this.
Jen :) xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you followed it well, and that you enjoyed it. I wasn't too sure about it myself as it is the first story of this kind that I've written. Report Review
Oh wow, this was fab :) I'm not always a huge fan of first person, but you pulled it off beautifully here, and you really got into Fred's voice -- not an easy feat considering he's dead, lol.
It took me a while to figure out teh pairing, but I definitely liked it when I worked it out. So well done! I'm headed out of the door, so I wish this review was longer, but I've really got to go -- congrats on your first fic!
~Soraya~Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
It's the first time I've ever written in first person in that way, and it shocked even myself with how well it came out.
Thank you for the review, it means tons! Report Review
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