in the 1st para u wrote," He weakly raised MY hands to his neck, trying to keep the wound closed long enough." wil u plz crrct it?Author's Response: oh whoops yeah i will c: Report Review
T_T cry everytime i read/watch snape dieAuthor's Response: aww Luda.
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This is so sad! I love all the thoughts running through Snape's head. I can definitely agree that his thoughts were along those lines.
The descriptions of the fear and pain Severus was going through was very well done, realistic even.
Your use of the Deathly Hallows quote was brilliant. It added a lot to the story.
I really enjoyed the way you wrote "the boy" and "the dying man" instead of Snape and Harry. Somehow I think that made it even more sad and realistic.Author's Response: OHMYGOODNESS YOU ARE SO SWEET.
Thanks for reading and taking time to review my little story! :') I really appreciate it.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :')
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