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Review #1, by hetty Colour

5th June 2012:
This was just so beautiful, I love the idea of it. I've been really into angst lately and this was just perfect, I love how you described their love by colours, that was really unique and cute. There's nothing to say about this, I can't fault it. For such a short piece of writing, it was so lovely.

- hetty

Author's Response: Thank you! you're too sweet :) I just love the ship so much that this just seemed easy to write, hopefully I'll have the sequel up soon :)

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Review #2, by CloakAuror9 Colour

18th May 2012:
Hello there!

Aw this is so sweet! I really love the idea of kind of spinning the story around the different colours. I really like your Victoire.

I think you managed to paint a really good relationship between Victoire and Teddy in such a short story. I love the idea of Teddy wearing chap-stick! Hahaha, imagine that! I would love to see that happen. If only Teddy was real :(

In any case, you wrote the story really well and I enjoyed every bit of it. Also, I would love to read a sequel for this one :P

CloakAuror9 xx
Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Thank you! I've always seen their romance as so sweet, just two people falling in love but of course nothing is that simple so I had to throw a bit of angst there :P

I hope to have the sequel up soon :)
Thanks again for the marvelous review!

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Review #3, by ravenclawriot Colour

3rd April 2012:
Oh you should definitely write the sequel.

Author's Response: I hope to do so :) i have it hand written as of now so I have some typing and editing to do but hopefully I can get it up soon :)

Thanks for stopping by!

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Review #4, by NightStar Colour

14th March 2012:
absolutely beautiful!:O
really really good!
you should write long stories because i'm craving for more!>.<
hoping 4 d sequel!

Author's Response: Thank you! you're sweet :)
I actually have the sequal drafted so it's just a matter of getting around to editing it and a bit of touch up but hopefully it will be up soon

thanks again for the review!

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