Hi! I'm here with my review, so sorry that it's late! Thank you again for entering my challenge :) This was so beautiful, it almost got me into tears. You could really feel the emotions that were floating round in Snape's head, and I felt so deeply sorry for him. I think that the lyrics from the song worked amazingly well with the plot of the story, the words worked, they got the story, if you get what I mean? Probably not like, I go on a lot. I understand Snape now, I never used to at all. I knew that he loved Lily, but the way you wrote in Snape's POV was magical, and I hope that you write more from his point of view, because I will definitely read them! Well done, this was really good! Look out for the results, they should be up later today or tomorrow! ~peace2lovepotter~ Report Review
This is so beautiful, and so sad... Report Review
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