Wow... This was even better than the first one!
Her reaction to finding out the stranger was the Dark Lord, and then the conversation that followed, was beautiful. I love how you showed she was fascinated by him, and held a lot respect for him, also. And then the interactions with her mother, Narcissa and Rodolphus were really in-character, perfect. Please update as quickly as you can!Author's Response: Thank you :)
I have to admit that most times, it is a struggle to get the characters, and I am glad to see that they didn't turn up ooc...
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This is really good!
The portrayal of Bellatrix and Rodolphus is spot-on, you've got them perfectly!
I loved her interaction with Voldemort, and how she treated him without actually knowing who he really is.
I so want to see how she will react now that she found out!Author's Response: Thank you for your review :)
I love to see that I've got the characters, because they can be quite tricky to write... Report Review
write more to this. please. or i will personally sit you down in front of a computer with microsoft word.Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
I'll update as soon as I can! Report Review
I think that this is absolutely brilliant! I can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Thank you for the review :)
I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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