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Review #1, by padmoonyfoot7 What Mother Doesn't Know
11th June 2012:
Ooooh, more please!
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

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Review #2, by Hermione389 last day of class
5th March 2012:
I like this, it's a good idea - looking forward to the next chapter! By the way, I noticed some sentences need to have some commas in to break them up; for example, "Remus was on his left tawny gold head bent over a book as he walked" should probably be, "Remus was on his left, tawny gold head bent over a book as he walked" Anyway, I love this chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah I have problems with grammer and spelling. I'll try to get around to fixing it. Thank you for being my first reviewer.

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