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Review #1, by CocoaMocoa The Heads dorm

8th March 2012:
Its OK. Not that great. GET TO THE KISSING! ^_^

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Review #2, by shannon LOUISE PIKE DOT DIT DOT The lettter

8th March 2012:
woO CHARLIE THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE YOU STROY


SHANNON XX

Author's Response: Thank you :)


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Review #3, by leylaLOVEdh4eva The lettter

6th March 2012:
good. :) make another chapter soon!

Author's Response: Thanks will try when i have the time :)

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Review #4, by Timechild The lettter

5th March 2012:
Nice start.

I would suggest a little more detail. Like...How were each of them feeling when they saw the other in the teacher's room? I am guessing that they were shocked, but it doesn't say, so I don't know for sure. You should put that in to give the chapter more punch.

Overall...nice start.

Author's Response: Thanks, its has been a while since i have actually wrote something like this so thanks for the idea. Will include more its just finiding the time to carry on :)

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